Celebrian, Sell i Nos Galadhad by Redheredh
Magicfeather205 · 19 September 2019 · Chapter 24: A Needed Kindness
I realise that this review is (many!) years late, but I come back to this story so often that I had to leave a review. Your stories are some of my very favourites, and your Celebrimbor is my favourite, as well - he's my favourite character! I love how sympathetic you make him, and so likeable. It is a shame that you seem to have finished writing, but thank you for writing stories that I've enjoyed for so many years.
Jenninfer · 9 November 2009 · Chapter 24: A Needed Kindness
hello! i just read your story and love it hope you could continue with it; maybe you dont have other ideas for finish the story but try hard i really love that story thanks
Author's reply
Hello, Jenninfer! I am glad you like the story! I have indeed been on a long hiatus from posting. And I do have an ending for this. But, only in draft. I will be slowly finishing it, though. Thank you so much for the unexpected review!
perelleth · 18 April 2009 · Chapter 24: A Needed Kindness
I never tire of your delicate,detailed style. Actions, emotions, deep thoughts, atmosphere are allconvenyed in such amount of telling detail thatinstead of overwhelmingitis always thought provoking. I can always feel myself again inside the sophisticated atmosphere of that palace and its elegant, cunning, inteligent dwellers of many races. The backstory is always rippling at the surface, most intriguingly! And Rhiss´is a new,refreshing pov. And Glamien a welcome acquaintance for the boy. Their accent was lovely, and also how they exhchanged news about what they both missed! I had tolaugh at the pancakes particularly, for it is so. TO each and every exile, the food of his home is the very and only true food! There are few things that can make you feel aborad deeper than food. And of course I had to love this line: "‘Tis a reward of service to see far away places and meet all manner of folk" Rhiss' youth and adventurousness, and his great heart full of hopes are a delight. I was lookingforward to seeing him intrude into whatever comedy are Elrovail and Hrassa playing, but a peek inot Celebrimbor's workshoppartocularly when strange sounds are coming out form it looks promising enough.I cannot tell you how I enjoy each chapter of this wonderfully rich tapestry. ANd also how youweave the silvan culture so effortlesslyinto the apparentl tightereldarin court. THe mix is one I would not mind have known.
Author's reply
... now, I feel overwhelmed. I'm truly glad you enjoy the story. I am especially glad you liked the page and the nanny interacting. Huzzah! That was the whole point about getting a taste of..eh...from home. You know the rewards of service better than most. :) Well, ya know, things go the way they go, and Celebrimbor's apartment may not be it. Luckily for Rhiss. I think Eregion and Ost-in-Edhil was the place where the two most diverse cultures would have gotten their first broad look at each other. A lone Silvan in Gil-Galad's court or a Noldor in the Greenwood would certainly be intresting, but not change either's world. A returning native filled with new ideas and experiences can. All courtesy of their Sindarin (read Galadrim) mutual friends hosting the grand event. After getting the Exiles and Dwarves to foot the bill, of course. Thank you so much for the review! I always look forward to them! :D
Kitt Otter · 16 April 2009 · Chapter 24: A Needed Kindness
Hello Redheredh! I was so happy to see all this Rhiss… it’s almost overwhelming. “Her face glowed with fading starlight” oooh, that I like. “Unnecessarily mean” almost makes her sound nice. :D A mortal woman? Interesting. So potentially she could be serving a little Celebrian till she’s grey. Kinda weird. But I’d like to learn more about her. I liked the nanny more and more with each sentence. Almost impervious to the Princess’ charms, able to scold her, even. Why, she even got her to apologize. Heh, Rhiss is not the only one who is disorientated by Celebrian’s moods. I enjoyed Glamien and Rhiss’ woodland accents. And of course I was fascinated by the tree blight – definitely devastating for woodelves. Somehow I never thought of their forests having those kinds of problems. What a terribly long book that would make: History of Tree Blights in Arda from the Waking to the Present. On a light note, the danger of the woolen rugs was hilarious. Runnybread and mallorn syrup!!! Ah, now I’m drooling on the keyboard. *mops* Fun chapter; as always, worth the wait! ;)
Author's reply
Hey Kitt Otter! Oh dear, too much for you too? And next chapter we're still with him. Maybe I should switch the chapters around... *g* I like that too. Wait, is that sarcasm I hear? :) Actually, I think people with authority think it necessary to be firm and not be swayed by sentiment when it comes to making people do as they think those people should do. A young child would call that being mean, although also understand why that is so. Goodness, do I remember rightly that you have kids? So, you know what I am talking about here. Since elven children grow between 25 to 30 percent slower than human children, that may be so. Although, the Professor did say that they are walking and out of diapers in less than a year. I chalk that up to grow spurts, though. Hmm, we do outlive the majority of our household pets. Each of whom we care for and treat as one of the family, I would hope. Glamien had been at her job for a long time before Celeborn hired her. Yes, he chose her, not Galadriel. :) Darn, does the little princess appear to have ADS? Personally, I think she is experimenting with her fledgling powers and has become overly confident. I thought of a blight because elves tend not to get sick themselves. An enemy of any foresight/patience might experiment with a different angle of attack in order to kill many with the least effort. Also, in UT, Galadriel tells Celebrimbor that she would like something, which is the Elessar he makes, to help her preserve the forests. As well, I liked the idea that the Silvan learned some things from this that helped them survive the creeping malaise that spread over the Greenwood and turned it into the Mirkwood. The crackle of static has betrayed the presence of many a sneak to others. I could have gone on about hair standing on end... LOL! Here's a clean napkin. Now, please pass the butter. Thank you so much for saying that! Your reviews are appreciated!
illereyn · 12 April 2009 · Chapter 24: A Needed Kindness
Yay! A NEW chapter! *dances around for joy* I liked Rhiss' observations, though I felt that the story is starting to move a bit too slowly - I really want to get to Celeborn's ballroom dance, let alone Hrassa and Celebrian's tea party! Still, Rhiss is very very cute! I loved the detail about static electricity and carpet. Some typing mistakes as well - which some sentences didn't make sense, unfortunately. Keep updating pretty please!
Author's reply
*g* I understand you wishes, but it will be a bit more before more in the great hall. Cute! *chuckle* I really think he would protest being called cute. Especially in front of Celebrian. Shoot! That's what happens when you don't have a beta. But, please! Won't you email me and let me know where I goofed? Slowly, but surely. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! It is appreciated.
perelleth · 19 January 2009 · Chapter 23: A Singular Delivery
Thank-you very much! I was delighted to see this, and got to enjoy it th weekend! I had almost forgotten this poor kid burdened with the precious bow! And it is wonderful to see how you manage to transform a trip from one room to another 8 across a large palace, granted) into such an interesting adventure full of details that might split out into little different adventures of its own! The bowels of celeborn and galadriel's residence look as itnersting as the outer common halls! The conversation with the butler was priceless. Little Rhiss stood his ground like a resourceful, sstubborn elf. celeborn would be proud of him, but I bet he already knows his good qualities! This boy is charming. I really love his pov, how he ponders and weighs and learns and reasons his way all through the populated corridors and the bred or malicious servants. Duplcity, rancor towards Hrassa... well, this trip is full of lessons for him! Even the unexpected discovery of the last guard! A Silvan! And a well behaved and courteous one at that! i really loved his surprise, and how he checked his findings with his assumptions! This Rhisss is really an endearing side character! Will Hrassa take him under his wing, before Elovaril flayls him with her tongue? That ending was a real cliffhanger! thank you very much!
Author's reply
I am glad you enjoyed it! :) Lately, getting anything into shape to post has seemed impossible. Oh, I had all kinds of things in mind for the great hall, but found it did not move things along. While, Rhiss needed to be set up for his integral role. Sorry if that was a spoiler. I am happy that you like how he is turning out. *g* If I ever get the next chapter done, I hope what happens next turns out to be entertaining. Thank you for the review! They're always appreciated!
Kitt Otter · 18 January 2009 · Chapter 23: A Singular Delivery
Hello Redheredh! *not believing eyes* Really, truly an update? And all about Rhiss! I enjoyed being in his head. *laughs* All those impertinent remarks that never came out. “I am not your son!” - Ha! I so wanted to say that for him. Ah, I do feel for him, being a homesick country boy who misses his grandfather. I liked hearing his voice inside of Rhiss. The description of the bow was very good; it was like I could feel its living wood too. Interesting about the little politics and intrigues among the servants. Even (or especially) among them you have to be careful with whom you talk and serve. So I guess Elrovail’s not the only one to watch out for. *g* It’s kind of funny how the Lord and Lady’s names gave the little fellow safe passage. *jumps* That scared me – I was sure it was Elrovail. Celebrian! Should have figured. By Manwe’s blowdryer, she’s a bossy little thing. Now I must know if Rhiss will ever get to speak with Hrassa... -Kitt : )
Author's reply
Hey there, Kitt! *g* Yes, really. But, don't get too encouraged. ;P I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. Intrigues and all. Hopefully, I can get you to jump a few more time before the end of the story. Now you know why the princess needs a savvy governess to keep a closer eye on her behaviour. Thank you very much for the review! Manwe's blow-dryer *snerk!*
illereyn · 15 January 2009 · Chapter 23: A Singular Delivery
Oh, and I was also wondering about the fact that household guards had to be 'of certifiable Eldarin descent'. I take it you meant Eldar as in Exiles, not as a general term for elven descent? It seems a strange preference for Celeborn (who is Sindarin royalty) and a fairly impolitic decision for Galadriel (who rules a Sindarin/Galadhrim population). It seems a strange policy even for Gil-galad, who was raised by the Falathrim, and is representing himself as King of all elves. On the other hand, the mention of Lady Elrovail's suspected...doings...with Hrassa was a really nice touch as a reminder of the different sexual mores of different elves. :D
Author's reply
Ah, an afterthought! Love 'em. :) Before quendi-kind left on the Great Journey to Aman, Orome had named the First-born, the Eldar, because they loved the stars. The Eldar went west, out from the place of awakening, seeking to live in the light of the Two Trees. Those who stayed behind in the east were named the Avari, the Unwilling. So, those elves that embarked on the Journey are considered Eldar. Those that did not are considered Avari. The Eldar consisted of three kindreds. It was a group within the Teleri who left the Journey, choosing to stay by the banks of the Anduin. These were called the Nandor. There are several definitions of that name, but one is "go back". Eventually, a group who became the Laegrim seperated from the Nandor and made it to Beleriand. Those that remained became the Silvan. (with some Avari mixed in most likely). The people who made it to Beleriand but stayed looking for Elu Thingol became the Sindar. Both groups along with Cirdan's folk missed the last transport west. And thus, the rancor amongst the Sindarin peoples over what is Caliquendi and Moriquendi. Sindar are not Avari. But, the Silvan could be. The Exiles just think of all Umanyar as Unwilling. Gilgalad is King of the Elves of the West - the Eldar. As opposed to elves of the east - the Avari. The Sindarin peoples are an alliance of both light and dark. I think that they embody, if not embrace, both aspects in a paradox the pious Exiles find hard to understand. So, Rhiss is subject to certain prejudices which he has to acknowledge. Different cultural mores indeed. But, I like who Elrovail is, which is herself. Thank very much for the question and comments!
illereyn · 15 January 2009 · Chapter 23: A Singular Delivery
Yay! A chapter! *dances around for a bit* Nice change of view here; I really like you show us life in the back corridors, complete with intrigue! though I do wonder a bit at Rhiss' age: he seems more mature than I first pictured him as. How old is he again? And you ended on a nice note of suspense - I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's reply
*G* Thank you too! For the happy dance! Rhiss is a young kid, only a little bit older than Celebrian. As you say, pov has changed. We met him through Galadriel (and Celeborn's) eyes. He most certainly does not see himself being as young as they see him. Perhaps I used relativly grown-up language because this is his relative pov, but Rhiss'thoughts and actions are still those of a country boy away from home come to work in a big city company. Although, his situation is closer to an apprenticeship than to paid servitude. In my experience, most country boys, whatever their age, have a lot of horse sense in liu of street smarts. I appreciate your enthusiasm very much! However, as you have seen I post rather slowly. But, I promise I will finish the story!
Kitt Otter · 17 May 2008 · Chapter 22: A Little Darling
I wonder if Elvensmiths *are* clever enough to make a child-proof device; I’ve never known one that works. Not allowed to interrogate! Hmph. I share Galadriel’s disappointment. I would really like to know why Hrassa left. Ha, Secret Pass! No, I do not think it would be at all fun to move an army through Moria, even in its glory days. Sounds like an obstacle course, perhaps funny for the Dwarves to watch. But surely nothing beyond Celebrian’s enchantment is needed to keep the bowman… Rhiss is wonderful; I hope he shows up again. Also Celeborn’s handling of the situation was fun, being strung with crude male jokes and Galadriel’s glee. Thanks for the entertainment so far. As I said, I like how you make oh-so-aloft Elves approachable. I am supposing the wisest thing to do is to start at the bottom of the page to read the rest of your stories? -Kitt : )
Author's reply
lol, there is one. A well-driven nail. Not much can be opened after that. ;) Well, there were a few little clues earlier... I really think that the Pass was - for most of time - known to none but the Elves of Lothlorien and Rivendell. After all, they are the only ones that would have need of it. *g* Hrassa does see more than susceptible. Rhiss will. Galadriel does seem the sort that would enjoy both great and simple things. I am very happy that you were entertained by this story so far. I do see elves as different from humans in many ways. However, not as ethereal beings per se. That aspect I would reserve for the Ainur. If you are inclined to read more, I would say read in the order written, from the bottom up. As with this story, you will see how my writing style has changed and not changed for the better while I tried a few different things. And please, if you read more, read entirely at your leisure for your own pleasure (hopefully you will enjoy some of it). For I am not swift at posting, and you will catch up very quickly. Thank you so very much for reading this entire story and reviewing as often as you did. It was much appreciated and quite unexpected - and certainly a pleasure for me to read your comments!
Kitt Otter · 15 May 2008 · Chapter 20: A Privy Council
I guess I do get a kick out of history books; just do not ask me to repeat what I read. At long, long last Galadriel makes her appearance! You do so well in her head. I like the way she interacts with her husband – odd but fun. Very emotional-laden moment with Hrassa. Galadriel is indeed formidable, with the visions, mind-talking, and the dress. Id she then the setter of the fashions of Elvendom? *g* Oh dear, Elrovail does have a strange (meanish) sense of humor. It just gets more and more embarrassing for Aurthon and Laerlinath over the cups. Quite a good pair are Celeborn and Galadriel. I feel sorry for Galadriel’s dress. Now what is this menace? And will Hrassa be able to save Celebrian? Or, in the ironic way of visions, will things turn out far from what any of them anticipates? -Kitt : )
Author's reply
Promise - no pop quizzes. Odd, you say? *g* I suppose so. But, remember they are both friends and lovers. I am always supposing that Galadriel chooses to exercise all her powers, including social leadership. There is no doubt that she is aware her every example will be imitated. ;) Elrovail is a dragon-lady, after all. Do not fault her for trying to enjoy it. ;D If you ask me, I think C&G were remiss in storing them in the parlor. They should have child-proofed the cabinet. They have their moments and their motivations. Oh, it'll be fine. Who's gonna notice... or speculate on how it got mussed-up. Well, not that far from envisioned... Thanks for reviewing. You are almost at the end!
Kitt Otter · 11 May 2008 · Chapter 18: A Lady Disappointed
Aha! this is how the Elves always appear so pristine. Now I wonder where Legolas has hidden his attendants through the films. Elrovail baffles me yet. And boy, Hrassa is cheeky. I like how you describe the fabric – oh and the fashions! How quickly do they come and go amongst Elves? Every century or two? If Celebrian continues with these shrieks, she will turn the whole household’s hair white. Celeborn’s eruption at Hrassa was rather dramatic. I liked the details of their drinking, from Laerlinath’s eyes – pitying Hrassa and worrying for her husband. Of course Hrassa does not want to be cooped up for hours with cotton-brains. You worked up the scene to be so… yes, scary. It was a great shock (or relief) that it was only Mirathel. Poor Laerlinath. I’m shaking myself. I do want to see Galadriel, and yet I rather dread it now. Mirathel’s reaction made me feel her surprise; it is sad, and why did Hrassa leave like that? I don’t know… having Valar and Maiar running around sounds exciting to me… OK, but the Elves who come back from the dead, I agree, are a little strange. More history! So many, uh, politics involved; so many tangled loyalties. But it made sense, even to me. : ) -Kitt
Author's reply
Reminds me of that old joke about shouting: "Make Up!" and getting pancaked. Elrovail likes to baffle... Hrassa likes to joke around... They are both prone to laugh at people. But, Hrassa is more good-natured about it ;D Who knows how fashions change outside of court? But, inside I would think it depends on the how people want to impress. lol. Every evil brings some good with it. Remember that. It was building up, methinks. And he felt the need to stop a second incident. I thought she was being rather sanctimonious myself. ;) Although, if there were toy horses instead of dolls, maybe he could stand it for a little while. *g* Ha! She will not fail expectations... at least,I hope so, anyway. I would liken have Valar about like having the Greek gods traveling about your backyard. Much too dangerous for us plain folk. Me, I want to live in boring times! Well, I am glad you get a kick out of the history lectures. I do but I am writing this story mostly for myself. So, most people find it too dry. They want angst and romance. *sigh* Thanks for the review!
Kitt Otter · 8 May 2008 · Chapter 15: A Wayward Spirit
I like seeing more aspects of Celeborn: a lady’s protector, charmer, and diplomat. The whole scene between them was fun. Like Aurthon, I want to be more acquainted with Hrassa. Celebrimbor’s missing of the Trees is a wonderful touch. True, the furniture would need last a while to be practical… I always wonder over that. I am glad to see Celebrian again! (Impertinent imp). Her ideas had me laughing – to be Celebrimbor’s husband, inviting Hrassa to tea, and horsie, of course. It is too bad no other children are around, but then the adults’ lives would be duller. -Kitt
Author's reply
Let's face it, as a female, Galadriel lasted where others were felled. She had to have had better support, if not an outright advantage, from her choice of mate. The Professor did not dispose of Celeborn, as he did of other spouses either. Once he saw the Two Trees archetype in two of them, he increased Celeborn's role. I tend to see Aurthon and Hrassa as more alike than dissimilar. Everyone gets nostalgic about something they use to have that made them feel wonderful. Celebrimbor, though, has turned inward to find another source of fulfilling grace. He has turned to the Flame Eternal, the stuff from which the world was made. The energy source of creation that Sauron seeks to use. Preservation is an Elven ability and goal. Thus, the Elessar and the three Elven rings. lol! "husband"? I know you meant him to be her husband. Well, she will be out of the picture for a while after this. There are children around, but not living in the palace per se or free to play with her. Her parents would prefer she have proper company to associate with and not keep the scullery girls and busy pages from doing their jobs. (Aurthon and Laerlinath will soon help out with this problem, me thinks.) Yes, I agree with you there, the adults' lives would be a bit more sedate! Thank you for this review, too!
Kitt Otter · 7 May 2008 · Chapter 13: A Slight Disappointment
Elrovail and Celebrimbor are quite a pair. Celebrimbor's past, of course, is rather dramatic - having to turn his back on his nearest kin. Elrovail's predator nature is scary, but witty. What her real background is would be interesting to know. Hmm, I guess Elrovail has a slight non-penchant for the little princess? :) -Kitt
Author's reply
Rather adversarial, yes. But, Elrovail really does not dislike him anymore than she does Aurthon. Celebrimbor split with his family was not happy, but it seems he became happier afterwards. Well, a lady has to have a hobby. There is indeed more to her then has been revealed. And actually, like most everyone else, she is simply not happy with the way Celebrian has been acting up and getting away with it. She is fond of the child...for her own reasons. Thank you for the reveiw!
Kitt Otter · 5 May 2008 · Chapter 12: A Narrow Doorway
Aurthon and his lady are still delightful. To Celeborn and Hrassa's discourse - No, I do not feel as though I was hit over the head, *grins* more as though I ate a lot of cheesecake. I'm happily satisfied. I like the moment they all see each other. "Tall fellow standing next to Galadriel"; oddly enough I only just read the joke of that today. Oh, but it is sadly true... Galadriel's hmm, forebodings for Celebrian gives at least a peak into her character: the fretful mother. But will we be seeing the Lady soon? *squirms* Such anticipation! -Kitt
Author's reply
LOL! Good! One thing great about reading is that, sans snacks, it is non-caloric. But, watch out for those cups! The pity is for years, readers have missed clues about many characters that would have given them a better experience of the story. Things have changed only somewhat. The movies did not help Denethor either... The Lady will show up, but it will take a few more chapters. *sorry!* Thank you for letting me know you find this an enjoyable story! :D
Kitt Otter · 3 May 2008 · Chapter 10: A Masculine Touch
Oh, so many close escapes, between Elrovail and Khror (those scenes I loved, by the way). What a rough life these Elves at court have. Aurthon is a very devoted husband. Poor Laerlinath - a lady-in-waiting to Galadriel. I do not know if that is good or bad myself. -Kitt :)
Author's reply
Heh! Look out it will get rougher. Someone might break a nail... ;) I like Aurthon. He has an honesty that is lost, it seems, when youth is lost. Laerlinath, on the other hand, had just gained some. I am glad you found some humour in Celebrimbor's trials!
Kitt Otter · 1 May 2008 · Chapter 8: A Dangerous Future
I had to read this in hits-and-runs all day, and happily I made notes. Yay, more history! Hrassa has gotten more than his share of it... very fascinating to be in his head, to see a Green-elf feel for the way events played out; and his loyalty to Celeborn’s house is splendid. Ah, you unravel the Amdir, Amroth, Malgalad mess. Celeborn becomes a more dynamic character; honestly, I would never guess that from his performance in the movie. *laughs and coughs* Looking forward to my next read! -Kitt :)
Author's reply
As long as you do not think I am pounding you over the head with that history, I am pleased. ;) It sometimes seems respect can be earned, but loyalty like love is much more mysterious. Mysterious in all meaning of the word. *g* One of my goals is to try and get divergent accounts of things to connect together in some way. Oh please! He is not Mr. Cellophane! At all! Thanks for continued interest!
Kitt Otter · 30 April 2008 · Chapter 6: A Little Bird
"Beings" yes! Oh, bother, that is embarrassing. *laughs* Celebrian and her uncle's relationship is so beautiful. The spinning scene was fun. “To receive a punishment for my escapade.” - That is very Celebrian. Aurthon and his wife add another dimension and intrigue. What will come of the interview with Galadriel I cannot wait to see. -Kitt :)
Author's reply
Ah yes, baby juggling! One of my worst foibles... ;) I liked it too much as a child, perhaps. The little princess can put on a brave show when it come to do'in the time for her crimes. That is maybe admirable, but certainly not her recitative behaviour. Glad you are still intrigued!
perelleth · 30 April 2008 · Chapter 22: A Little Darling
Finally! Thre are many itnersting details in the world that you have constructed around the Lord and the Lady, and the fact that they were childless for so long because Galadriel would miscarry struck me as very fitting. And I was reminded of this painful situation in this chapter, seeing Celeborn being so fatherly with the poor squire. That must be a very endearing moment for the lady, I suppose, seeing the good father that her lord is. The whole vignette was delightful:from your delicious description of the page ( it made me think of my eldest nephew, who is eleven now...and I fear to think how tall he may have grown when I see him this summer) to their mind argument and pondering ofall optinos, to Celeborn´s professorial attitude...and his meticulous keeping of all fomralities. It is true that Galadriel holds true power and deep in her status, I so agree with you, and I also like how well matched they are, and how they play the game as a well cooridinated team. YOu are showing here a marriage that is also, a shared enterprise, and I love this more and more the more i reflect about that. THey may disagree in certain points but it seems that they are sure of each other and their ultimate goals, and that is hat makes them storng. A delightful chapter, but also a very deep one. I was reflecting the other day how you have managed all hrough this tale to highlight the intricacies of power and politics, and the subtleties of personal relationships and job ones in a very engaging tale, without a bad guy, without catstrophic events, without cliffs... I would love to se how Hrassa receives this test...and to know whether he identifies him as one or not.
Author's reply
And happy that is so! Well, Galadriel does know what kind of father he was with Nimloth and Malgalad and is with Celebrian, and she probably likes this aspect of him very much. Although, also probably never tell him that. :) In my mind, Galadriel was not that involved with child-rearing until she thought to have a family of her own. Then, she found being surround by her friends and their babes, without having one of her own, very saddening. So much so, she somewhat distanced herself from children. And then, Celeborn brings poor baby Malgalad home to be like their own... *sigh* another story that's waiting to be told... I am glad you found this scene entertaining and reminiscent. Yes, they are a partnership! And respectful, I think, of their different, and sometimes difficult, responsibilities in making things work for their own and everyone else's benefit. "Without a bad guy, without catastrophic events, without cliffs..." Gosh, those things are all there. Just off-stage or referenced. *sheesh* I guess this is nothing more than a lively discussion. But the, besides introducing Hrassa, expounding my take on Lindarin history was one of my goals. I do intend for Rhiss to catch up to Hrassa and deliver Galadriel's invitation. But, how long it takes the bowman to realize the page harbors an erroneous idea about him remains to be seen. ;) Thank you very much for the review. They are always anticipated and appreciated!
Kitt Otter · 28 April 2008 · Chapter 5: A Strange Debate
I love this more and more! I am so glad you put translations at the end - I always have trouble beyond Ada and Nana. Every little detail - arms swinging, gravel cracking under foot has delightful reality. Celeborn and Celebrimbor have become living things to me. Hrassa and Celeborn's discussion had me enraptured, with so much tangy history. I once tried to write a story of Elmo's descendents and your version here has me excited. I will look at your other stories. (I suppose I will be spending some time here. *grin*). -Kitt
Author's reply
Thank you, I am glad you are enjoying the story. :D I do try to get the gist across when using elvish words, so there is the least interuption in the story. But, one learns as one goes along how well that actually works. *g* I like a sense of reality to my fantasy. Call me silly... Heh! "things"? Oh surely, you mean 'beings'! ;) The Professor's work is an alternate history, at all. But, I am tickled you find the ideas here exciting. Glad there is more to entertain you! I appreciate your comments!
Kitt Otter · 27 April 2008 · Chapter 3: A Sad Demise
This is interesting... it was the summary is what caught my attention: short and quirky. The characters are so well described that they come to life before my eyes. Everything is elfy in a down to earth sort of way. Celebrian is cute and sweet but sometimes an haughty thing. Ah! But she is a princess and look at her parents! As I find the time I will continue to read. -Kitt :)
Author's reply
Hello Kitt! Goodness, it is very unusual, especially for me, to get a review on long posted chapters. But, I most definitely appreciate it! You will learn, if you have not reached that conclusion by now, that I am a bit quirky about canon. Certainly not there with the rest of the crowd on everything about the Eldar. I am glad you found this story entertaining so far. That factor comes and goes with each chapter. *sigh* Really, I think Celebrian is haughty from living in a palace more than from being an actual princess. ;) I hope you do enjoy the rest of the tale for what there is posted. Which is not done at the lightening speed of other writers, you will notice. *another sigh* But, if you like Hrassa and Celebrian, some of my other stories have them together as an epilogue. Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing!
autumn fallaise · 22 April 2008 · Chapter 22: A Little Darling
Hey! My name is autumnfallaise, and I started reading fanfiction about a year ago. Unfortunately I'm not good at writing stories so I restrict myself to reading. This story is really good! Celebrian is sooo cute! I also like how you wove politics into the story - it made me think a lot. I especially like Celeborn adn Galadriel together in private - they are so funny. I really want to know what happens at the dance! And at breakfast too. :) I really enjoyed 'Nadhemmen' too. autumnfallaise
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Hey! and Hello to you, autumnfallaise! Please believe me when I say, a reader who reviews is beloved and worth their weight in mithril! And I too started off as only a reader, but imho you learn what is best about writing by reading. So, do not be bashful about trying your own hand at telling a story. You just might surprise yourself. :D I am very glad you like this story. Thank you! We do mean to entertain. Hopefully, you will enjoy what does happen next. However, long it takes me to post... I am glad you enjoyed that other story too! You may or may not have noticed that the tales with quoted summaries are those that Hrassa tells, and they all have an epilogue with Celebrian. If Celeborn and Galadriel are who interest you, try "Oak and Willow" by Marnie. Or her "Battle of the Golden Wood". Her stories are excellent and the writing outstanding. I also strongly recommend Bejai and Bodkin's stories, if you have not already discovered them. ;) Once again, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Bodkin · 21 April 2008 · Chapter 22: A Little Darling
The ability to hold secret converse must be very handy! If a bit distracting - although I daresay that C&G have managed to master doing several things simultaneously. Rhiss the page is very sweet - and I'm not against Galadriel's desire to exact a penalty from her husband for incorporating the child into his wiles. Although I have little doubt that his retaliation will be equally apt. So they have to schedule more ... intimate moments. Takes away the spontaneity, but I daresay they are too busy weaving their web to be impulsive. Breakfast should be fun. Although they have some hours to get through first!
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Tolkien says that all elves (just like some say about humans and telepathy) have the ability to speak with their thoughts. But, like singing and drawing and writing, one has to suppose the talent can vary. Training is usually more than a plus; a necessity to do it well. Woe be the long-lived elf who cannot multi-task! Boredom is his likely lot! Rhiss certainly is a cute kid. Hemay grow up to be a charming adult... Yep, Galadriel's intuition is pretty good, most of the time. *g* Marriage counselors will often recommend a couple go out on a 'date', like they use to, as an exercise to to keep the relationship healthy. Sure, it's scheduled, but not necessarily scripted. ;D Well, Galadriel was not going to actually invite anyone else, just let Celeborn think about it. And he did. Hmmm, the fatal hour is coming and who knows who will get through it. Thank you very much for reviewing. It is always appreciated.
Bodkin · 31 March 2008 · Chapter 21: A Dual Objective
My, but Celeborn and Galadriel are well matched! Anyone trying to put one over on them would have to get up very early. I love their relationship - and their desire to manage the world around them. Although that has the potential to be a little alarming. Shame their daughter is a little too young to be brought in on the plotting - because I think that whatever Celeborn can't pull off with his authority and Galadriel cannot obtain through ruthless charm would be attained instantly through the power of the child's eyelashes. I can't see Hrassa tiring of Celebrian any time soon. Even in elven terms of soon. But I am sorry that Celeborn is insisting that no-one enquires as to the reasons for Hrassa's departure. Ever. How can he refuse to pander to my curiosity?
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Yeah, how else could they stay together? But in their youth, this is what they both wanted - to rule without interference from their elders. Well, they got even further than that. Now they are the interfering elders! "ruthless charm" good one. "the child's eyelashes" another good one! Which Celeborn has to point out, since Galadriel has not as of yet seen them interact together. *g* Oh, maybe after a while Hrassa, or even Celebrimbor, will own up. Still, it will be his choice, not the Lord's or the Lady's command. That is all Celeborn is really aiming for. Outside of holding up Hrassa's integrity. And, at this point, avoiding being told outright that he was a bad leader or a lousy chief to his follower. Or a lousy friend... Thank you for the review. Something always much appreciated!
perelleth · 20 March 2008 · Chapter 21: A Dual Objective
I am sorry that it took me so long to get back at you, but I caught a cold that developed into something worse... anyway, I must say that I enjoyed this chapter a lot, also because it dealt with something I've been thinking about lately, which is the different roles of females regarding power. I love how you state Galdriel's advantages while being a lady and having to comply with certain rules and restrictions..only apparent. Even if it is Celeborn who leads the ball in the end, she has her weapons and tools and can wield them wisely to her ends. I also like Celeborn's cunning and how she slowly ends up understanding his plotting. You know how I love backstage maneouvering and patient weaving of strategies, and Celeborn's been masterful at that all along this tale. His more than elaborate plot to retain Hrassa is a show of subtlety but also a show of an intelligent mind that loves the game for its sake, and I can only relate to that pleasure! Now you get my poor memory wondering. Do we readers know the true extent of HRassa's sudden departure? I think not, and since I am not Galadriel, I canot help but wondering, and asking Hrassa, and the author: Is there a tale that we will ever get to know? And what was Celebrimbor's role there? I also liked that you threw him into the mix. And of course, now I wonder where is Hrassa in that eventful crossing of the Redhorn PAss an age later? Congratulations, the plot and character developement gets even better as this goes on.
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Perelleth! You poor thing, I hope you are recovering. It sounds like your resistance is down from your previous sick bout. In regards to C&G, it seems sometimes people forget about the cultural paradigms Tolkien was working with. Women exercised great influence while supposedly second-class citizens. But in general, patriarchal societies discriminate according to rank more than gender. Decisions are left up to the head-person whether male or female. It is made very clear that the Lord and Lady of Lorien were equals. However, with differing responsibilities. The Lord could actually throw the Fellowship out, if he wished. The Lady was the one person who could oppose him. She could not change his issued commands. She could only change his mind about what he would command. Likewise, if she had refused giving cloaks or lembas to the Fellowship upon request, he would have had to convince her to be generous. He could not make her give those things to them. Ya know, I think Celeborn would be a good card player. He works with what he is dealt as best he can. He can take the short view in context with the long view and take action. Of course, with your job, you know how hard that can be sometimes. Short-term vs. long-term vs. immediate needs. You ask what's up with Hrassa's going. Well, way back in the beginning chapters, he hinted at a few thoughts about his choice to not return home. Celebrimbor was sorta his runaway note. He had to tell someone. But, his note did not get found and read as expected. And, when it comes to Hrassa's whereabouts in the Third Age, I have nothing to say. Not now anyway... Thank you so much for the review. I hope you regain your strength and get back to a better and more resistant state of health soon.