Sherlock21b
· 6 April 2005
· Chapter 3: A Sad Demise
Wow! I really love how this story is progressing.
Best of all are the small details. Galadriel is so often portrayed as the more temperamental spouse, so I loved the scene when Celebrian's thrilled because she's gotten off easy by getting sent off to be punished by mom instead of dad.
And the relationship between Celeborn and Hrassa is fascinating (I can totally see Celeborn defending the concept of will over fate). Can't wait to see the next installment.
Author's reply
Ah but, I like dwelling on details to the point of the plot not progressing. :P I am trying to avoid doing that but it's tough.
Celeborn just does not seem the type to let things get *too* out of hand. And Galadriel is rather temperamental, if you ask me.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Elena Tiriel
· 6 April 2005
· Chapter 2: A Quiet Cell
Well, you've certainly caught my attention! The richness of detail in your story, and the fullness of the characterization, makes it a real joy to read. I can't wait to find out more about Hrassa. Hope you update soon!
- Barbara
Author's reply
Oh thank you so much! Right now I need all the encouragement I can get! Yep, Hrassa does have some history with Celeborn and family.
And your wish is happily granted! Check it out. ;) Though the Chapter 4 may take some time...
Bodkin
· 23 March 2005
· Chapter 2: A Quiet Cell
I do like Hrassa. And little Celebrian - definitely her parents' child. What a resilient little toughie. Well, except when it comes to being caught where she shouldn't be by her Adar.
And she speaks Silvan!
I think she has captured Hrassa. He might have served Nimloth, but I'm not sure he had much choice in the matter - and now he has another princess.
Celeborn isn't going to manage to remain wrathful for long. Especially with Hrassa deliberately diverting him. Although both Hrassa and Celebrian are fascinatingly nervous.
More soon, please. I'm longing to know what happens next!
Author's reply
Thank you so much for reviewing!
I like Hrassa too. ;) Apparently, so does Celebrian. At least, enough to *sneak* him home.
Makes sense that Celebrian speaks the language of the Galadhrim since that is where she has lived until now. Hrassa would not have known that though.
Hrassa does have a lot of loyalty issues when it comes to the Lindarin princes. But, he is aware of his strengths and weaknesses. And Celeborn knows exactly what they are too.
Hope we don't disappoint.
Bodkin
· 12 March 2005
· Chapter 1: A New City
This is intriguing. And although Glamien's reaction to someone looking at Celebrian seems a bit extreme, in the situation of lawlessness and violence you have set up, it is very understandable.
I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's reply
You are right. The idea of lawlessness and violence among elves is rather daunting. But, this is the Second Age, not the First or Third. Eregion is neither Aman nor a homogenous eleven kingdom. The Valar have totally withdraw and no more benevolant Maiar are visiting Ennor. They have been freed of the Dark Lord and (I think) cannot conceive of another arising. In this colony, there is no tried or even true ruler watching over his people as they settle here. So, Celebrimbor arrived on a frontier 'wilder' than what Oropher or Amdir ever encountered. I always considered how Annatar was able to just come in and take up residence an indicator that the government was very different in Ost-in-Edil than in Lindon.
Thank you very much for the review! This story may not be full of action-adventure or romance, but I am hoping that some readers might find it a little thought-provoking.