Reviews (75)

irene · 21 August 2006 · Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am still fascinated with your story. But, alas! I am a nitpicker. To ride from Osigiliath to Minath Tirith would take half a day (on a lame horse). I can't help, I'm simply disturbed by such blobs and even more when I enjoy a story. There are maps, plenty of them, you only need to look at them. `Tis a bagatelle, of course, your story is great! Irene

irene · 21 August 2006 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I've read some chapters of this story at ffnet and left a review, if I remember correctly, for Chapter 2 whose description of nature eventually leading to a storm I thought was astoundingly well written. Well, I`m glad to read this story here again and more of it. I have only one objection, though. I guess you got the idea from the movies. Whatever Aragorn's reasons were to live the merry life of a ranger and adventurer for decades, I don't think it was insecurity or dread. He was just waiting for the right moment.In my opinion, Aragorn is a very clever guy who uses opportunities -- and persons -- at best. OK, this story isn't about Aragorn but about brotherly love and I enjoy it. Thanks! Irene

Linda Hoyland · 15 June 2006 · Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I eagerly await Aragorn and Boromir's meeting.I'm sorry you have been unwell and wish you a speedy restoration to good health.

Bodkin · 13 June 2006 · Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Faramir coped well with having to stay behind. And they couldn't both have gone, really. Boromir is very frail - I'm glad he was given the choice of remaining with the elves, but, in the end, I'm not surprised he chose the more difficult path. He's never lacked courage.

Dot · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ack, jenolas – I kept meaning to e-mail you. I really hope all is well now. It’s great to have you back but you need to look after yourself first and don’t be worrying about us. I’m totally intrigued by this. I have no idea where you’re going with it!! Aragorn is right to try and be sensible about this. I mean, in terms of not rushing off straight away and going by boat to try to give Boromir the chance to come back with him. And not telling the people of Minas Tirith yet – they obviously loved Boromir and have already grieved his loss; they don’t need to have to relive that if it turns out that he won’t survive. I admit I gave a little gasp when he told Faramir that he should stay in the city! It says a lot about Faramir’s sense of duty and faith in Aragorn that he would agree not to go back to his beloved brother, especially when he knows that there’s chance that Boromir will still refuse to return. Haldir is really growing on me. He kind of reminds me of Faramir here, actually. He’s putting duty and love for Galadriel first, even when there are other things he wants to do. I do hope, for Haldir’s sake, that he sails soon. I think he needs it. Boromir’s dream was very disturbing. He clearly feels that he’s failed. What horror it must be to him to imagine that his people wouldn’t welcome him. I think it’s more than his body that needs healing. It was interesting, though, that the second he hears the anguished cries of his brother, he pushes his own feelings away. It’s a courageous decision. I thought it was a lovely moment when Haldir tells Boromir that he would have been welcome to join Celeborn’s colony of the elves who don’t sail. Though it sounds like Haldir hasn’t been telling everything he knows, eh?! I’d like to know what else Galadriel has seen for Boromir! I’m still thinking it might be a chance for Boromir to see that his people and home are in good hands, to make peace with himself and then move on. But who knows? Except you, of course, and I’m willing to let you lead me on for another while ;-)

Julia · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I have read the whole story so far and like it much better than any of the other "Boromir lives" AU's--and there are tons of them out there. I hope Aragorn is able to truly heal Boromir so that he can return to Minas Tirith. I would love to see everybody's reaction when their Captain-General returns, hopefully to the sound of those silver trumpets.

Dot · 10 April 2006 · Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I’m sorry you haven’t been well, jenolas. I hope you’re feeling better. *hugs* How hard it must have been for Faramir to leave his brother, even though it was to get him some help. There must have been that fear of letting go when he couldn’t trust that he would see him again - and he knows very well the pain that would cause. I’m sure I’ve said it before, but I do enjoy the friendship between Boromir and Haldir! Haldir seems like someone who needs purpose at the moment, and Boromir gives him that – and it turns out that they have much in common! LOL at them joking about their brothers. That was a good point about how Boromir shouldn’t see his beloved city so war damaged or the guilt and grief would be too much to bear. Of course Faramir would still see clearly enough to do what was best for his brother, no matter how much he may have wanted him by his side. You made me laugh with overwhelmed!Aragorn leaving an ink blot on his address! I do think Legolas is showing great wisdom in staying out of Gondor’s affairs, though ;-) I don’t blame Legolas and Aragorn for being concerned for Faramir at first – it does rather sound like this trip has had the opposite effect than Aragorn intended. And their concern for him is so touching, as is their attempt to console. What a surprise it must have been to read Haldir’s message! I love that Aragorn doesn’t even hesitate about going, even though you’ve made it clear how busy he is. I’m excited to see what happens next! It’s great to have you back. But never worry about us – we’ll be here whenever you’re able to update :-)

Bodkin · 10 April 2006 · Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't blame Faramir for dashing back for some extra-affectionate farewells. After all, the last time he said good-bye... Haldir is doing a good job of looking after Boromir - I'm glad he sent a letter to Aragorn, because otherwise the King might be looking for a padded room right about now. Legolas was sensible to keep his fingers out of Gondor's pies, really. It won't take much for some of Gondor's lords to start looking for reasons to put this particular new broom back in his cupboard. They've had a long time to get used to life without a king. I enjoyed Aragorn dropping blots on his speech. Even if he didn't!

Katieelessar · 23 March 2006 · Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, you've kept me in such suspense. I have enjoyed this very much so far and I am rooting for Boromir to live fully again! I can hardly wait to see what occurs next! Regards, K.Elessar

Bodkin · 9 March 2006 · Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It must be so difficult for Boromir to accept his physical limitations - he is so used to being strong and powerful. Bringing Aragorn to him definitely seems the best idea. (If Aragorn can be convinced that Boromir is anything more than a delusion of his new Steward's, of course. That could be a problem.)

lwarren · 7 March 2006 · Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have been a total lurker lately, but I really am enjoying this story. I hope Faramir is able to get Aragorn to consent to coming to Boromir (I don't see why he wouldn't, but I know how author's love a twist or two in a plot -lol). Faramir's faith in Aragorn is touching, and his need of his brother rings so true for that character. Great chapter, jenolas! Update soon - I can't wait to see Aragorn's reaction to the news that Boromir lives! linda

Dot · 22 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I do love the way you write the teasing nature of the relationship between the brothers! Even now there’s such innate ease between them. You made me smile when Faramir hugs Haldir in gratitude. And Haldir’s pride at serving his Lady is really touching. I feel sorry for him because it seems he really will mourn her when she sails. Mmm… you’re probably nice and warm where you are but a hot spring sounds lovely to me about now! (Yes, even without the two lads!) It was a very moving moment when they each see the scars the other one bears, made all the more so by Boromir’s recognition that the physical wounds are not the worst ones that his little brother has. I think I grinned the whole time they indulged in horseplay. They certainly enjoyed it and seem to have acquired some energy from the pure happiness of being in each other’s company, but I wouldn’t be surprised if they suffer for the exertion later. LOL at Boromir reprimanding his brother for speaking so lightly of Arwen! I think he would be glad, though, to know that Aragorn and his wife have such a good relationship with Faramir and clearly respect him and think of him as a friend. I’m not surprised the conversation about Rivendell and Gondor went on all afternoon! I really felt for Boromir, though, when he asked to know about his beloved city. “I will not be returning to Minas Tirith, Faramir” Ah. I suspected he might say something like that. But crikey, you nearly broke my heart when he talked about honour and how he should not be trusted and there’s no place for him in Minas Tirith! I think it’s brave of him to sacrifice this for honour and to do the best for his people, but it’s heartbreaking to think that he sees himself as less of a person now. And then! Then! “My days may yet be numbered.” Ack. So maybe it is just a temporary thing, that some power conspired to give the brothers this last chance together, but that’s all it really is. Who knows? Besides you, obviously ;-) I really can’t wait to see what you have up your sleeve for this, jenolas!

Dot · 22 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Chapter 3

There seems to be quite a good relationship between Boromir and Haldir. There’s certainly a sense of respect and Boromir is clearly grateful for whatever was done for him. I love the idea that the bond between Boromir and Faramir is so strong that not only was it known in Minas Tirith, but Haldir can feel it now. And right now both brothers are struggling with a lot of mixed feelings. I can understand why Faramir thinks Boromir isn’t real – I get the impression he’s dreamt about him before as he struggled with his grief. And his anger is very believable too after all he’s suffered and it seems even now that he might never have known the truth if he hadn’t stumbled across it. Of course, Boromir didn’t know about Denethor. What a terrible shock. Plus, Boromir knows what it’s like to be tempted by evil so it must grieve him to know how far his father went. I’m glad Faramir was able to reassure him that he wasn’t responsible for Denethor’s actions. It was also good to see that Boromir is honest in telling his brother about his seduction by the ring. His description of what happened when the arrows pierced him is intriguing. It’s quite magical and spiritual. It seems to me that these ghosts of the past possess much honour and strength – I like the idea that they called him away from Sauron’s influence. It also sounds like there were a lot more forces than it seemed at work to make sure the quest succeeded and are now still at work. Perhaps to give both brothers the chance to see each other, to speak again, to each know the answers to their questions? I’m starting to suspect that this might be a grace granted to them for now and not the happy home-coming that Faramir thinks. Excellent chapter! Onwards…

Dot · 20 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just stopping by to let you know how much I'm enjoying this - I'll be back with proper reviews for the last two chapters, hopefully in the next few days. Great story, jenolas :-)

Bodkin · 19 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Boromir. I wonder if he was saved because he needs to come to terms with what happened before the orc attack. Faramir has a purpose in this new world order - but Boromir cannot do the one thing on which he prided himself most. Yet he and Faramir need the comfort and support each affords the other.

Eleny · 19 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You portray the psychology of the two brothers very well. As for Boromir, he surely must feel broken in two having lost the ability to use his military skills, to be the fighter and protector of his beloved city and people. This is somehow the crisis many of us meet in a certain way. Fight it or stand it, both may seem far too complicated.

Eleny · 19 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Chapter 3

A very interesting and believable twist. I guess there were some scandinavian legends about spirits of mighty warriors coming back to the almost dead bodies if they chose to continue the course of life. This could by all means happen to Boromir, especially with Galadriel's assistance. The end of this chapter, however, gives further intrigue! Very well written!

mirthor · 18 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

As far Galadriel helping to save Boromir - after she purposely sent him out to his death, I should hope so! Nice to see the brothers time together here. Is there something special abotu the spring? Neither seemed to be suffering from any of their wounds while playing in the water - perhaps it's a source of healing.

Bodkin · 12 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Galadriel sending helpers to bring Boromir back from the brink is a good scheme. It must be terrible disconcerting for Faramir to see his brother - I think he reacted quite well to it really!

mirthor · 11 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Pleased to see a Boromir lives tale - it's been quite a while. Thanks for sharing.

Bodkin · 8 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Boromir and Haldir! I'm not surprised that Faramir has been feeling as if he's been watched ever since he arrived. I can't wait to find out how this develops!

BM · 6 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hey, I have nothing at all against Boromir lives stories, as I have always wondered how things would be different if he became Aragorn's steward. I always figured Faramir would still become prince of Ithilien and Boromir would become steward and rebuilt Osgiliath, the city he loved so well (I'd love to see how badly Boromir and Eomer would tease Faramir about marrying Eowyn and when the children came along.....and I'm sure that Boromir and Eomer would put aside any disagreements they might have to team up for that!). So it's perfectly fine by me that you decide to explore this idea! And you're doing a wonderful job of it, too! You've really got me interested! You've got the characterizations down right and the characters are sharp and realistic--3 dimensional. The plot line is quite believable and each scene has been written very descriptively and realistically--I can easily picture what is going on. You are drawing me in deeply into the story, and these qualities are all earmarks of an excellent story to me! So please keep up the good work! I can't wait to hear how Boromir survived and what Faramir's reaction to him will be, not to mention Aragorn's, and the other fellowships! Please post the next part soon!

Dot · 6 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is getting quite dark and creepy! The first half made me feel unsettled enough to jump when a door slammed downstairs while I was reading it ;-) It seems to me that it’s more than just someone – like the elves – watching him; there’s a sense of uneasiness, of something otherworldly. Of magic almost. It’s like Faramir has stumbled into the twilight zone!! You did a great job with the storm. I can really feel the closeness of the air and it adds a sense of urgency and disorientation. For a second I really thought he was in the Houses of Healing – you can imagine my surprise when Haldir appeared! And there are others? Very intriguing. I don’t blame Faramir for being confused. “Fear not, Boromir, your brother will be well in a few days.” Well. Now that was a fall-off-the-chair moment! More please! :-)

Bodkin · 5 February 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a pilgrimage Faramir would make, once matters had calmed down a little. And he would sense his brother there anyway - he has spent far too long brooding on events not to eke every bit of atmosphere from the area. Finding Boromir's pack relatively undamaged must have twisted the knife, too. I'm not surprised his dreams are haunted.

Dot · 5 February 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this twice, thinking – huh? What’s she talking about AU?? And then I realised that it’s still in progress…! Sometimes I’m not very bright :-) Ok, so I don’t usually read AU but I do read jenolas and this looks very interesting. This chapter is very atmospheric. There’s a sense of age and memory and even loneliness that’s quite haunting, and of memories that still linger, but there’s also a feeling majesty and a greatness that touched these lands. The eeriness of that feeling of being watched and of Faramir not sure if it’s the ghosts of this place or of his own memories or what is quite unsettling. And I think it’s a very poignant image of Faramir going to this place where his beloved brother died but it’s something that makes sense and the way you show his connection to the place and compare it to Legolas’ feelings in Ithilien really shows the sensitivity of his soul. There’s a very strong sense of Boromir here, though whether it stems from being in this place when Faramir always had such a deep connection with brother or from his own desire to see him again or from something else. It’s a lovely thought that Boromir was bringing gifts home and the journal sounds perfect for Faramir. The nightmares are quite terrifying and Faramir’s feeling of helplessness is painful to see. But the ending was very intriguing – great last sentence! – and I look forward to seeing where you’re going with this.