shirebound
· 13 June 2007
· Chapter 5: The Gaffer's Day
A lovely Father's Day tale! It's wonderful that the Gaffer finally tells Sam he's proud of him, and appreciates everything he is, and has accomplished.
Author's reply
To admit Sam wasn't a ninnyhammer after all must have been both difficult and rewarding for the old fellow. I've honored the mothers who might read my stories--this is for the dads!
Pearl Took
· 13 June 2007
· Chapter 5: The Gaffer's Day
*sigh*
Beautiful, Larner. I'm all teary. A special and wonderful day indeed!
Thank you :-)
Author's reply
Thank you, Pearl. This was among the last years of old Hamfast's life, and I'd think his children would want to find some way of bringing him full circle so he could see how his devotion to his family had paid off. So glad it moved you.
Lindelea
· 13 June 2007
· Chapter 5: The Gaffer's Day
*sigh*
That was lovely!
Author's reply
Thank you, Lindelea. I did one for Mothers Day--had to get in a proper tribute for Dads, too. See you next week.
Raksha The Demon
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
A delightful story; though I feel rather sorry for Halgil, who was just trying to do his job!
Author's reply
Glad you enjoyed it, Raksha. Poor Halgil--only trying to do his job....
Thanks for the feedback.
grumpy
· 7 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Delightful story, of the two girls having a day on the town. But it was bad of them to slip the guard. They should not worry the guy so. He has enough problems.
Good thing Strider, "of the citadel" came along before they got arrested.
Author's reply
Well, we all try to slip away from time to time, I think. Yes, the guards of the Citadel have enough to worry about without teenagers thinking to slip away on their own; but that's the way of it sometimes, after all.
And Strider finds his hunting skills work to his advantage even when he's been largely stuck in town for most of the last few years. And of course, he does work in the Citadel for the most part!
Glad to see the note from you! Thanks!
harrowcat
· 7 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Great adventures for both daughters and Dads! Am I the only one who wants to know what Strider might have said to Halgil? Sharp-eyed, even if it takes him a while to work out who Strider is. Drawing the girls out of the crowded market place when he did may have saved them from a lot worse.
Happy Easter - am off to spring clean the kitchen and the dog!
BTW That was my mum's first pressure mapping test - it is new technology here. She now has a back piece in her chair to make her sit upright.
Hope the cable is getting closer!
Author's reply
Yes, a fairly simple adventure for the two of them, and a chance for two fathers who also find themselves at times resenting the restrictions placed on themselves to let themselves loose a bit as well. Halgil has had enough of a shock, I suspect, realizing just who it was he pulled out of the market crowd--I suspect Strider is amused to let him stew in his own juices for the moment.
So--Jet and the kitchen are both getting a spring cleaning, are they? Kerry and Belinda and the cats all got baths--Yogi and Ruffy are due them next. Glad to hear that the procedures are being used there as they are now commonly used in our region of the country, at least. Seattle and Tacoma are our nearest big cities, and both are well known for medical innovation, so such things tend to spread fairly quickly to our more remote area, as we're less than a hundred miles from either.
A blessed Easter to you and your family!
Kitty
· 6 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Adolescence is a difficult time for parents and children alike, and even the High King of Gondor and Arnor can’t be immune to these problems *grin*
It was not very nice of the girls to trick their guard, even if it is understandable that they – and particularly Melian – resent to be permanently followed. Luckily Aragorn is not Denethor; I’m not sure I want to imagine what the latter would have done to the guard for losing them.
Not sure what to feel about Halgil. On the one hand he may have prevented that someone tried to rob the girl’s money, on the other hand I was irritated with him for thinking at once because they had money they must have stolen it. And Sam thought obviously the same. And I suppose not only the Princess Melian, but the daughters of at least some other nobles should have a bit money of their own. They seem to have disguised themselves very well as commoners for Halgil to take it this way.
Aragorn and Sam acted very nice and understanding; but I suppose the King isn’t always happy to have a guard trailing after him, too. And I seem to remember he once rode to Eriador without any guard ... ;-)
The end was funny. Oh, I can imagine Halgil’s face as he realised just *whom* he had accused of having stolen money *snicker*
Oh, and in answer to your response to my last review: Yes, I am completely deaf, though I don’t know exactly why. Shortly before my sixth birthday I fell off of a children bicycle, and though I wasn’t hurt, when I woke the next morning, I couldn’t hear any more. It may be the fall had something to do with it, but there are nearly as many theories as I have seen doctors over the years, and some of them are plainly ridiculous. But I can live with that very well. If you want to know more, maybe we should discuss it per e-mail?
Happy Easter, my dear!
Author's reply
Yes, adolescents always find themselves resenting the restrictions they must live under, or so my own children taught me. Aragorn is a reasonable person, and knows that when a child is intent on doing what he or she desires even the best of guards may prove impossible to keep. He expects his daughter to succeed at times in evading them, just as he expects them to seek her out and find her as quickly as can be arranged.
Halgil has just had his first experience with the Royal Princess, although she may well visit the markets alone again, properly followed by a discrete guard, of course. It's likely that Melian has funds of her own, but has not been to the public market in the center of the city before, as she and other lords' daughters would be expected mostly to visit the more exclusive shops in the upper levels. Yes, she may well have been approached by a pickpocket, but I'd suspect that as the King's daughter and Elrond and Celeborn's descendant she would be far better trained in self-defense than most common pickpockets might expect. After all, look at who her uncles are! But Halgil must be in mild shock realizing just how close he came to royal displeasure. Hmm--I just found this plot bunny has reproduced. Help!
And I strongly suspect Aragorn himself feels the same resentment for being always followed as she does--and he is well accustomed to having to watch out for himself, after all. Yes, he himself went off unescorted once as King, and I sincerely doubt he ever regretted doing so.
And I'd be glad to communicate further about disabilities via email. I've had little to do with those with auditory deficits, other than age-related hearing loss or conditions that may be easily aided with hearing aids. Have had a few students I've needed to approach on their good sides, I'll admit.
Author Reply: O, and a blessed Easter to you also. Alleluia!
Baggins Babe
· 6 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
“And your father--what does he do?”
The glance the two girls exchanged was suddenly highly amused. “He works in the Citadel,” the taller girl finally admitted.
Well, yes, I suppose he does! Priceless!
Well, the teens and tweens are not an easy time, either for those going through it or their long-suffering parents. No wonder Aragorn is rather exasperated and out of his depth, but he and Sam coped well.
A lovely story and yet more expansion of our knowledge of the lives of our favourite characters.
Author's reply
To tell the truth and yet not to reveal too much is often a difficult balancing act; and that question just begged the response!
And, as a mortal himself, Aragorn is probably more in sympathy with the two girls than Arwen fully appreciates, even if he can't help feeling left out as Melian deals with the changes in perception and appreciation she finds within herself.
So glad you enjoyed it. Glad the challenge was made.
Bodkin
· 6 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Adolescence is never easy - and I can see that being observed all the time you are outside your own rooms would be very tough on the royal kids. Aragorn and Sam dealt with it quite well - and maybe Melian and Elanor realised that the supervision is more for their protection than to keep them hemmed in.
Halgil may be feeling quite faint now - but actually, he can really congratulate himself on the way he was doing his job. The girls were suspicious characters in their own naive way - and he picked up on that and was investigating as best he could.
I suspect Melian and Elanor were quite glad to see Aragorn and Sam at that moment - just as they would probably have been rather huffy and quite indignant had they been found before Halgil took them in charge.
Author's reply
Oh, I do believe you are completely right, Bodkin, about all of it. And that Aragorn and Sam waited, probably listening quietly and with amusement as their daughters dealt with Halgil, is very likely, listening until they were certain the two lasses were ready for them to arrive and offer rescue from an increasingly embarrassing situation.
And Halgil was just doing his job, after all....
Thanks so much for the feedback.
Queen Galadriel
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
ROTFL! Oh, Larner, that is great, that is really great! And I wonder, maybe you've just given me an idea! (I've been followed around the last three days by a certain relative who thinks I'm extraordinarily gifted and loves to show me off, and who fusses over me unbearably, and somehow she seems to think my talents [such as she makes them] are connected with blindness. Now that is enough to drive anyone insane after a while! Maybe I should try something like this next time, some kind of grandly planned trick...or not...*grin*)
Oh, those poor girls! Granted, what they did wasn't exactly right, but being in their situation (the throes of adolescence, not under guards), how can my sympathy lie anywhere but with them? That was truly clever, and so terribly wicked! LOL! And the end is absolutely priceless! Thank you for a wonderful laugh!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
Oh, dear--I hope the lady can bear the strain of whatever trick you may be pleased to pull on her. I never quite had the guts to do something to my grandmother or my stepdad's mother, although Heaven knows I was often tempted.
As for what the two of them did--I'd think any adolescent girl in their situation would at least contemplate doing so. For a few hours of what feels like FREEDOM and anonymity, I think they'd try a number of things. And as Eldarion is also approaching adolescence, I think their father will be hard pressed to keep him under watch in a year or two.
And so glad it gave you a pleasant laugh. Enjoy indeed!
Queen Galadriel
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 3: Writing
I'm always pleased to see Tribbals!
But oh, this is touching, both sweet and sad. And to think that it was Frodo's slate. I think he'd be pleased to know where it ended up.
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
As I said, this is based on real life, and a co-worker recognized immediately the client who inspired this story.
And I agree, Frodo would have been undoubtedly very pleased to see where his slate ended up.
Linda Hoyland
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
I loved this, so very true to life,and what a clever ruse for the fathers to play the same game !Very enjoyable indeed.I take it you were describing a fathing with the wren on?
Author's reply
Yes, like daughters, like fathers in this case.
I hadn't truly considered the wren farthing, but wouldn't put it past the folk of Bree to use a similar pattern. I must suppose it was sticking in my subconscious, for quite frankly I haven't seen one for so many years I'd quite forgotten about them.
So glad you enjoyed this one and found it true to life, as did I. Was remembering days with two teenagers at the same time, each of whom seemed intent on causing as much disruption as possible. Heh!
Elflingimp
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Aw! that was great,it reminded me of some of the silly things I did at that age,I am glad my parents had patience!LOL They have plenty of white hair!
Author's reply
I was the tamest of the four of us, but I still drove Mom crazy at times. I was the most anxious of us, and would work myself into states if Mom was late.
Glad you found yourself relating. Thanks!
Radbooks
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
I'm glad Halgil was there and took them in hand before some dishonest person saw how much money they were carrying and tried to take it from them! Having a guard following you around would be so tiresome even as an adult, I can't imagine what it would be like if you were a young person.
Melian is definitely her father's daughter, though... clever disguises and plan! I'm sure that Aragorn did enjoy the rest of the day with his daughter since he'd evidently been feeling shut out of her life lately. Ah, teen-agers. *grin*
Very enjoyable read.
Author's reply
Yes, Halgil may well have saved the two of them from facing a pickpocket or something worse. And the two girls are certainly of an age to find having to be tailed constantly annoying in the extreme.
And of course Melian has inherited the sense of blending in both Rangers and Elves have practiced for years, a trait she must have sensed her father approved of. And to find he can enjoy himself in his daughter's presence from time to time must have been reassuring to Aragorn.
Yes, teenagers indeed! Remember when the daughter turned sixteen--found her a plaque that read, "I'm sixteen now: ask me anything while I still know it all!" and placed it on her birthday cake. She was not amused.
Calenlass Greenleaf
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
That was a delightful story. I can imagine Halgil's shock. *giggle*
Author's reply
Poor young guard--caught distinctly off guard by his royal princess and king both wandering around with Lord Samwise's daughter, all incognito! Glad you enjoyed it!
elanor winterflowers
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Oh, this was such fun! I so enjoyed meeting the girls and following them through their lovely day together—and seeing their dads again, too. My, but Sam was splendid! Frodo would have been very proud.
My daughter and I taught a class in LOTR to a terrific little group of 4th and 5th graders a few years ago; they're all in middle school now and clamoring for a "LOTR Reunion". It has occurred to that some good gap and after-fiction might be fun to share with them. This story would be something they would really enjoy; I'll definitely recommend it!
Author's reply
Oh, that sounds like such a good plan! Let me know how it goes!
This was written in response to a challenge to write a story in which Aragorn and Arwen find themselves dealing with their teenage daughter; and during the year Sam, Rosie, and Elanor stayed in Minas Anor with Aragorn and Arwen seemed a good time to place it. And of course Frodo would be proud of both of them, I'd think.
So glad you enjoyed it.
Armariel
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Teehee.....Elanor is a cutie pie....knows how to jew somebody down even if she is small! Yes, Melian must get tired of being guarded all the time...but it comes with royalty. Heheh @ Halgil, almost arresting the King's daughter!
Author's reply
Elanor is in her early twenties, much the same age as Frodo when he went to live with Bilbo. And, being her mother's daughter, she understands the art of haggling, I'm certain. As most would believe her a small child, finding out she not only was carrying some cash but was an experienced bargainer must have been a distinct shock.
And had he actually arrested Melian, I'm certain that Aragorn would not have held it against him--except he is relying strictly on "gut instinct" to identify the two girls as possibly having stolen from their parents. That Aragorn would possibly have looked askance at, I think.
daw the minstrel
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
Great "adventure" for the girls and their fathers too. What an age. Sam has been around lots of kids, but I'll bet Aragorn has some learning to do.
Author's reply
And it's likely that as Chieftain of the Rangers Aragorn has more experience with adolescents than Arwen does. But I agree--Aragorn undoubtedly has much to learn about fathering one of the creatures.
Thanks for the response.
shirebound
· 5 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Adolescence
It was only as the four of them turned to disappear into the depths of the market that the true identities of the two fathers, and therefore their daughters, sank into Halgil’s consciousness. His legs suddenly gone weak, he sank onto the bench the girls had quitted as he pulled a kerchief out of his sleeve to wipe his brow.
Poor thing! But what a lovely outing for the girls.
Author's reply
Yes, now and then Aragorn enjoys a day of being just a private citizen and a dad, even if it's a dad of an adolescent girl. And he probably takes a perverse pleasure in disconcerting unsuspecting citizens.
Poor Halgil--only doing his job, of course; but the two girls do deserve a day of relaxation, I think.
Author Reply: Yes, now and then Aragorn enjoys a day of being just a private citizen and a dad, even if it's a dad of an adolescent girl. And he probably takes a perverse pleasure in disconcerting unsuspecting citizens.
Poor Halgil--only doing his job, of course; but the two girls do deserve a day of relaxation, I think.
Kitty
· 3 April 2007
· Chapter 3: Writing
Nice to see Tribulation again. You’re the only one fanfic author I know who is including people with inborn disabilities in her fics, and that is one of the reasons I love them so much. (Ruvemir is still one of my favourite OC’s ever).
It was moving to see Tribbals writing on this slate, feeling she had accomplished something. And of course, it is a nice touch to know the slate had once belonged to Frodo.
More than twenty years ago, I had to do with some children with this particular disability during a practical training. Though communication was very difficult (as you state, they don’t speak very clearly, and that doesn’t help me with lip reading) I got the impression they do understand more than some people want to give them credit for. In this ficlet you pointed this out very clearly.
Author's reply
I, too, believe Frodo himself would have been pleased to learn what use was being made of his childhood slate as well as who was using it; and am so glad you appreciate seeing Tribulation again. I've always loved working with people with disabilities, and so many former students, clients, and friends who have had Downs Syndrome have been so delightful (although I'll admit the most threatening individual I've ever known was also Downs Syndrome, although he was anything but typical).
So you have a hearing disability? My husband was blinded at age nineteen in a freak accident, and many of my closest friends have been blind since birth--the fifties were the height of the period in which many children born prematurely were blinded due to excess oxygen, heat, humidity, and bright hospital lights due to Retinopathy of Prematurity, then known as Retrolental Fibroplasia. So I've spent much of my adult life living, working with and alontside, and enjoying myself with friends who are blind and otherwise visually disabled.
One of my current clients who is most capable and cunning is Downs Syndrome, and he loves finding ways of trying to trick us. We all love him deeply, and always forgive him, it seems, when he manages to sneak something by us, although when we catch him in one of his cons he just accepts it with good humor while figuring out how he'll slip things past us the next time.
Bodkin
· 3 April 2007
· Chapter 3: Writing
Tribbals is such a sweet character. I loved seeing her writing on Frodo's slate - almost as much as he would have done.
Author's reply
I'm certain Frodo would have been very proud to realize who had inherited his old slate and how she was using it.
So glad you enjoy her.
Unheard Chime
· 2 April 2007
· Chapter 3: Writing
This was a beautiful little snippet of writing! We don't often see these people represented in fan fiction, but you did a commendable job in this piece. I myself have a brother with trisomy 21, and it is both wonderful and heartbreakingly sad to see how pleased he gets at accomplishments that most of society would consider trivial. I think people forget how different life is for people with disabilities, but they also forget that these people are still very aware of the world around them. I'm very glad that you decided to write a piece about an oft-forgotten part of society!
Author's reply
Trisomy 21 is fascinating, and I remember how I first became aware of the genetics of the condition as a high school student and member of 4-H. One of our state institutions for the retarded sponsored a study of the condition and was examining the genetics of male calico cats, another situation in which three copies of the relevant chromosone appears; and they produced an exhibit on their study at a cat show our Junior Leadership group was volunteering at. I was fascinated.
I had three Downs children in my first classroom, one in which I worked with severely and profoundly disabled teens who were also visually disabled, and I continue to have friends and clients with the condition to this day. I have a good deal of affection and respect for those I know with the condition, one that allows ability ranges from barely functioning to extraordinarily high functioning. Certainly one of the most capable of those in my current caseload has Downs.
Tribbals slips into my writing now and then, you'll find. Do read Trials and Tribulation and A Luthien within the Shire.
My main work has been with folk who are blind, so don't be surprised when such folk appear from time to time.
Am so glad you appreciated this. My current clients all so wish to be seen as normal and do what they see others doing, and I admire their determination.
Beruthiels Cat
· 2 April 2007
· Chapter 3: Writing
Larner, this is the best thing you've ever written, in my thinking...heartbreakingly beautiful. Magnificent.
BC
Author's reply
I'm honored indeed. I find I like Tribbals a good deal and am pleased when she lets herself appear in one of my stories.
Armariel
· 2 April 2007
· Chapter 3: Writing
Tribbles is a true disciple of FB, considering his slate a sacred object. Blessings on her! ~~~{~@
Author's reply
Whether or not Tribbals realizes who used to own the slate is questionable, of course. But writing is one thing she believes folks do, so it's something she WILL do as best she can. And so her own determination reflects that of its former owner. Yes, in the end a true disciple of FB.
daw the minstrel
· 2 April 2007
· Chapter 3: Writing
I like the way little piece suggests gentle handling of a Hobbit child even in a less than respectable family. And the link between her and Frodo, however tenuous, is sweet.
Author's reply
Tribbals on occasion slips into my stories, first making herself known to me as I began writing Trials and Tribulation, although she held off letting me finish that one until I allowed mention of her to slip into Reunion. Then her family got mention in Ernil i Pheriannath, and she insisted on me writing A Luthien within the Shire. There's reason, I find, why after her mother's death she became mistress of her family hole rather than her brother's wife or niece by marriage.