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Belethil  by Woman of the Dunedain

A/N: I hope ya'll don't expect anything spectacular or amazing. I really tried with this chapter, and I hope that it meets your expectations, but I never really meant to make Belethil anything more than a one-chapter deal. ^^ I've added Maglor in here cause I am totally curious about him now, thanks to the authoress Deborah's ficcies, When I Am Wise, Naming the Stones and As Little Might Be Thought. Aymara was kind enough to point out to me that it was mentioned by the great Tolkien that Elves don't feel the cold, but for the sake of this fic I am going to ignore this little bit of information ^_~!


Elrond gloomily decided that he hated it at Himring. His dark eyes glared moodily out at the treeless flatlands that stretched in three directions. He pined the loss of the river that had once comforted him. There was nothing here. It was unlike anything he had been accustom to; Sirion had been his home all twenty-five years of his life. It was always so cold, with the wind blowing down from the mountains. Even the stars felt father away than they should, as though they were untouchable in this prison that had become home. He shivered and hugged his knees to his chest, wishing that his hair were longer. He'd shorn it but a few days before Maglor's invasion. Hair that had once brushed the middle of his back swung loosely by his ears, a feeling he was entirely unused to.

Worst of all, there were always whispers of the Simarilli. Some of the Noldorin Elves, like Maglor and Maedhros, had the consideration to hold their conversations when he was near. But others purposely raised their voices, to be sure that Elrond heard. They loudly complained that Elrond and his brother should be killed to punish their mother, Elwing, who had flown into the sea, depriving them of their Silmaril.

"Youngling!" Maedhros called, and Elrond's head snapped around. Unlike most Elves, the eldest son of Feänor had a rough, though not unappealing voice. Elrond was always surprised to hear it, and not a little frightened. Although Maedhros had never been anything but kind to him, Elrond had seen Feänor's eldest son wielding his blade left-handed with deadly precision. The memories still tormented him.

"Maglor is searching for you, Youngling," Maedhros told him, waving his right arm in the direction of his brother's study. In place of the hand that should have been on the end of his arm there was an intricately designed silver hand, the fingers slightly curled. Shivering again and flexing the fingers of his right hand unconsciously, the young Peredhil stood, his feet finding easy purchase on the thin ledge he'd been hiding on. Grasping the stone railing in both hands, the Elf-child easily launched his thin body over and into the corridor.

Elrond was familiar enough with his windy new home to find Maglor's study without any problem. He rapped lightly on the door but did not wait to be invited in.

It was warmer in here. The young half-Elf sighed gratefully; rubbing his chilled arms a little, Elrond took a seat near the fire. Maglor did not look up from the large book he was writing in, head bowed so that his face was hidden from Elrond, who waited patiently. For several minutes there was a companionable silence broken only by the crackle of orange flames and an occasional hum from the musical son of Feänor.

"This is for you." Maglor told Elrond quietly, pushing a silver-handled scroll across his desk, still not looking up at the Elf-child, though his hand had stopped moving across the paper. He seemed almost shy.

Curious, Elrond left his place at the hearth, picked up the scroll and retreated back to his seat on the rug. Slowly he untied Maglor's gift.

At first glance he thought it to be a copy of Beren's parting song, and he was puzzled. But after reading a few lines, he quickly realized that Maglor had altered the lyrics. Tears blurred his eyes and he brushed his arm across them quickly, trying to salvage his boyish masculine pride.

Farewell sweet earth and northern sky,
forever in the sea shall lie
Thoronwen, who to Eärendil did fly
beneath the Moon, across the sky,
Elwing the White
more fair than immortal tongue can tell.
Though all to ruin fell her world,
and were dissolved and backward hurled
unmade and left a dark abyss,
and yet were it's making good, for this-
the dusk, the dawn, the sky and sea-
that star-spray for a time should be.

"Who is she, Elladan?" Estel whispered in awe, tugging on the Elf's hand to get his attention. He puffed at his bangs to get them out of his eyes, which were fixed intently on the Elf-woman standing beside the man he secretly called Father. Elladan turned and spotted his sister. Elladan opened his mouth to explain to the curious young child, then did a double take; it had been his understanding that Arwen would spend several years in Lórien with their grandmother.

"It is my sister, Estel." He grinned, waving. Mimicking the Elf he so looked up to, Estel enthusiastically waved, enchanted.

Arwen smiled, lifting a hand in greeting. Elrohir was already running to his father and sister; Elladan watched as he danced around them, looking ridiculously like an excited puppy. Usually the two would wrestle, but never in front of their father. Neither was sure if it was proper (and both suspected it wasn't.)

"Lets leave them be for now, little one," he suggested, hoisting the seven-year-old easily onto his shoulders. Giggling, Estel agreed, although he couldn't help peeking back to catch a final glimpse of the beautiful Elf-lady.

"Easy, Elrohir!" laughed Arwen, turning to follow her sibling as he danced around them. Elrond watched with raised eyebrows, a sparkle of amusement in his sable eyes. Grasping her hands, Elrohir lead Undómiel in a dance, likely one of his own making. His eyes closed and his head fell back and together they sang; Arwen laughed at the silly Elvish words that her sibling spouted. Elrond joined them, surprising even himself. Neither of his children hesitated, but simply took his hands, and together they danced.

"A vanimar, I have never seen anything so wonderful!" Gilraen called softly from above them, smiling her pleasure. The Elves halted; none of them were out of breath. Elrohir cocked his head and listened for a moment, then turned to his father. A sober look fell upon his face.

"The Rangers have arrived. I must greet them."


[The lyrics in Maglor's song are expressly Tolkien's property, and I changed them solely for this fic.

Thoronwen, if I translated right, means eagle maiden.

Star-spray is Elwing in Sindarin.

A vanimar means: o beautiful ones.]





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