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| Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle by fan81981 | 14 Review(s) |
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| souad | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/18/2005 |
| So when will you update? PLEASE PLEASE update this story SOOOOOON. I hope you have still the inspiration to write.... Bye! Author Reply: Very late I know but I have updated. Sorry for the delay but I hope you're still around. | |
| Kristy | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/26/2005 |
| ::time out while Kristy does the happy dance in celebration of a new chaoter!!:: OK. I am so glad I found this chapter today! I have made myself stop checking regulary for updates. I hope the next one comes soon though. I cna't wait to see legolas and Rhinure in the midst of the Fellowship et al. I can't believe Rhinure used the phrase "I feel..." and more than once too. She coming along. WooYoo, I'm so excited to have a new chapter, but you've just made me hungry for more now. You know that right? Seriously, great work. I'm glad to find you haven't disapeared. Author Reply: Hope you're still around to dance at the latest update. Rhinure is coming along - I had fun writing the scene. But I think I have to work on Legolas now a little. | |
| LORE | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/18/2005 |
| Alright. I'm sorry, but I've nearly forgotten the names of all the characters and the plot. You need to start writting agian.I'm starting to wonder if your still alive! I could never go that long without writing! Please, hurry up! Author Reply: *grin* I am alive - though I might as well not be given the amount of time that work takes up. I work around 12 hours a day, six days a week so I don't have much time to write. But I am trying. Hope you like the latest effort. | |
| Amanda | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/4/2005 |
| I check this website very often for updates, I really like this fic and would like to know where this sequel is heading. Please , please write. You style of writing is unique and the way you develop the characters and plot makes it greater writing. This is an awesome legomance and talks about the problems in a realtionship and trying to understand each other. It's not a cheesy, easy love story. Your charcter development , i think is perfect and the charcters seem so real. YOu also use appealing minor charcters . Small details in the right place makes your writing so addictive , i have to know what happens .There are very few fics with this style of writing- so PLEASE update. Sorry couldn't leave a proper review before. UPDATE Author Reply: It was a pretty proper review and was much appreciated. Thank for taking the time. Hope you enjoy the next chapter as well. | |
| LORE | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/1/2005 |
| Hey Fan! I've been reading both stories from the beginning, and Rhinure is my favorite OFC so far. I check all 6 of the sites containing this story every day!!!!!!! Today is my birthday, do ya think you could make chapter 5 a belated birthday present? It would mean so much to me. QUICKLY PLEASE!!! I'VE BEEN CHEAKING FOR MONTHS. Author Reply: 6 sites - hmmm - which ones are they? Seem to have forgotten them since I usually update on two. You should be happy to know that I have just posted another chapter. Enjoy (fingers crossed). | |
| LOLTHHH | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/14/2005 |
| Happy Valentine's Day! Author Reply: A little late so I will wish you a Merry Christmas (it's early so the greetings should balance out). | |
| Lor | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/16/2005 |
| Just a Q: Did Rhinure spend the entire night with Legolas? Because earlier it was mentioned that she didn't feel comfortable doing that, but you didn't mention whether she left him or not that night. Anyway, great story, the suspense of waiting for the next chapter is pretty rough though! Author Reply: In a highly delayed reply to your question - no Rhinure did not spend the night. Just most of it. When she does I will tell you. It's important to the relationship progression. Thank you for pointing it out - will make it clearer next time. | |
| Amanda | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/6/2005 |
| I just started reading fan fiction and this story has got me hooked. I really like your style and plot. Please update this sequel. I can't wait!! Author Reply: Thank you for reviewing. A new chapter is up if you are still reading the fic. I apologise for the delay in posting but real life has been most hectic and I have just returned home after a month of training. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/13/2004 | |
| When I saw that your story had been updated, I about hyperventilated from sheer excitement! Anyway, I just wanted to take the time to say that I absolutely LOVE this story! I followed your story from fanfiction.net; it was one of the first LOTR stories I ever read, and I will always praise the day I saw it and decided to read it! It's been, what, a year now since you first started Moriquendi, and I've stuck to it all the way! Why? Because I've read a whole bunch of Legomances, and I hate to say that the majority of them are CRAP. Yours is the exception. Your style of writing is so eloquent, and the story flows incredibly well while managing to interweave all these wonderful plot complexities and complications without making the story seem like a bunch of rambling crap. The dialogue between characters is amazing! There's nothing anachronistic -- I can actually picture Legolas, or Thranduil, or other characters saying these things. And the character developments are wonderful! Rhinure's insights are so cool -- I like to see what makes her tick, and I feel pity for her because of her dilemma and the whole duty and honor vs. love. I love how you set up dichotomies in their personalities -- for instance, there's Legolas the husband, Legolas the Prince,or Legolas the elf, and there's also the always intriguing contrast of Thranduil the King vs. Thranduil the father (I don't like stories that portray Thranduil as this abusive son-hater. Anyway, who could even find the heart to abuse someone like Legolas? =) And your characters are so witty! The romance is so beautifully developed. You hint at their growing affection for each other besides having the physical relationship. It's nice to see one story where Leoglas doesn't fall down at the gal's feet and start worshipping her in a mere time span of 2 seconds. The tension between Rhinure and Legolas only heightens the story's interest and adds to my curiosity - what will happen next? Whew, I'm sure you're probably tired of all my rambling now, so I'll stop. I just had to get that out of my system before I exploded. Keep up the FABULOUS work!! Author Reply: Thank you for reviewing and your kind (and ego boosting words). They help in keeping the muse alive though RL keeps trying to kill it. I love long reviews so I was sad when your "ramblings" ended. Please feel free to ramble on if you wish. I would love to listen - even if it is not so complimentary next time. | |
| Souad | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/28/2004 |
| O yeah!! I was sooooo happy to find out that you have updated this story. It is soooo great!!! Keep on writing!!!!!!!!!! By the way,where is chapter 5???? Author Reply: Thank you for your kind word and I will most definately keep on writing if people like yourself keep reading. I am in the middle of writing chapter five. But if you were referring to the fact that the site shows five chapters for the fic - that is inclusive of the summary. | |