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| Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle by fan81981 | 14 Review(s) |
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| Brazgirl | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/27/2004 |
| Yes, yes!!! I loved the ending!! Go seducer Legolas!!! Go! This was so, so great! I was so happy when I saw you had updated it... I saw it last night but I coudn't read because I had two tests this morning... But I read it!!! Wonderful beggining, Rhinure thoughts while Legolas spoke were fabulous. I think she is getting more flexible with him, though she still have her reservations towards Thranduil she is beggining to understand the Wood elves. I loved when Legolas defended her in front of his father, it was very nice and meant something really important in his relationship with Thranduil and with his wife. A sad line was 'So this is what joy feels like'. This was so sad and yet represents her so nicely. That Avari is really concerned, isn't he? I guess he feels something is indeed happening there. It was a great chapter of a great story. Gosh, I am glad I could access internet today to read it. It made my day... Till next time (which I am very, vey curious and anxious to read). Brazgirl Author Reply: I was going to make Legolas repremand her but he was having none of it. That line just wrote itself and completely shocked me. But it was nice of him so I left it in. But you know what, I felt really sorry for Thranduil at that moment - his son has fangs after all, and they hurt. A painful if necessary lesson. Cothion is right to be worried - Eryn Lasgalen and its elves have a lot more surprises up their collective sleeves. He should be afraid, very afraid. Insert evil laugh right here. | |
| Joana | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/26/2004 |
| A new chapter! :D It was really good, very inteligent conversations, the descriptions of reactions during conversations... all really good! Now I can't wait for the marriage part between Eowyn and Faramir. Update soon! :) Author Reply: Sorry that I haven't been able to reply in a while but I was away on vacation and unable to access the net - plus side, got some writing done. I can't wait for the marriage part either. Got some good things planned, though I am a little shaky on how humand customs work in ME. Should update in a few days - fingers crossed. | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/26/2004 |
| at least the talk didn't have too much yelling. At least they talked about some important things, and some I had not even thought about- like the friend part. And the little meeting, that got me thinking... are attacks being made on Gondor, and Rohan? You really made me think in this chapter! I loved it, though. Don't keep us waiting for too long. -sofia Author Reply: I should be on vacation soon so the next chapter will be faster. *Fingers crosed*. I am glad the chapter made you think - even though my primary concern is the elves, Tolkien world is interconnected and I would like to stay true to that as much as my ability allows. Thank you for reviewing. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/26/2004 |
| Lovely, sexy tension. I enjoyed watching Thranduil try to balance the line between king and father. But these two need to learn to communicate out of bed too. Author Reply: Thank you. At least I got them in bed. Now when they come out is debatable. Communication is the next step; it's just that they do everything the wrong way around so it will take them some while before they can talk to each other without having to resort to sex or physical reassurance. Let's see what I can do. So - no more elf sex and a lot more elf talk. I can do that. | |