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| Phantasm by lovethosehobbits | 5 Review(s) |
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| Ariel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/29/2004 |
| Grrrr... I will finish this if is the last thing I do! Sorry, friend - I have not caught up yet, but I am working my way through. Lovely (if that can be used for such a graphic hurt comfort - heheheh) tale. Keep up the good work! Author Reply: So glad you are reading and enjoying it. I have missed you dearly, knowing that you are still there makes me feel much happier. I hope you will catch up soon, but understand that RL can be a bear even at its best. Love to you tree | |
| Coriandra | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/27/2004 |
| Another excellent chapter. It's good to see that Frodo's mind isn't totally out of it. He's starting to trust his friends again. But what if he gets another visit from that "lovely Lorelei"? That would not be good would it? I can't wait to see what happens next! Author Reply: Unfortunately male hobbits are an awful lot like male humans in that they can be easily swayed by a pretty face. But never fear, my fics always work out in the end and getting there is sooo much fun to do. Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully I'll have a new chapter sometime next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing. tree | |
| bobo baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/17/2004 |
| At least Frodo is willing to look at the factsand have doubts about what is true and what is false. That's a good thing, since most people who are blinded by seduction don't even want to look at the facts. (Personal experience with my brother!) Thanks for the update, and keep more coming! BTW, I don't mind at all about the blather! It's fun to read! And I am 28, since I asked you your age age, it would only be fair to tell you mine! ;) Author Reply: LOL you are too funny. Frodo is a very confused hobbit at the moment. And yes all the injuries and illness have weakened him in mind and body so he is definantly more susceptible to the 'lovely Lorelei'. Glad you're enjoying the story, more to come. tree | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/17/2004 |
| I love stories (reading and writing them) where the Fellowship works together to accomplish something difficult, and bonds in the process. I love how you wrote Aragorn's detailed and calm explanation to Frodo about what everyone did to save and help hhim. Author Reply: I am so glad you enjoyed my chapter!! I figured it would take Aragorn pointedly telling our boy about how each person there was contributer to his rescue that way Frodo really can't think anyone is against him and he can see for himself how much he is loved. At least that is my hope....he IS being heavily swayed by other factors, obviously. Thanks for reviewing...tree | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/17/2004 |
| Poor Frodo. I hope Gandalf explains where he was first so that Frodo doesn't think he's trying to 'cover his tracks', so to speak. Author Reply: Yes indeed...we will just have to see who is the more persuasive...Lorelei and her beauty (men can be such suckers) or Gandalf and the long history of trust that he and Frodo have....I'm rooting for Gandalf. Yep, even tho' I'm the author I seldom know how the dice will fall until they do, it keeps life interesting. Thanks for your review. tree | |