| Light on the Way by Larner | 3 Review(s) |
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| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/1/2004 |
| I'm glad Arwen knew about the grandchildren (and named them) even if she won't be around to see them. Good think Elladan and Elrohir turned up to follow her - just to see that she is safe through her last days. I hope they then take ship so they can comfort / be comforted by Elrond and Celebrian. |
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| Imrahoil | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/1/2004 |
| Not so very rummy (whatever that is). I had skipped the part about "you who were named for my father", once again loosing points for not reading properly - by the way, whoever named the horse gets 1 point in the Tolkien geek test -, so I had no problem at all with all those Elroses popping up like snowdrops. Sorry about your back, I hope it will be better soon. |
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| Imrahoil | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/1/2004 |
Tadaa, redemption, redemption. Have a closer look at the last sentence, please.
Author Reply: I was rummy, wasn't I? Wrote Elros every time I meant Elrond. I think I need some sleep, if my body will accept it. Hate it when my back goes out and I can't sleep. |
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