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| Phantasm by lovethosehobbits | 6 Review(s) |
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| Coriandra | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/25/2005 |
| Yikes this is terrible! Hi Tree, sorry I haven't reviewed the story for so long, but it's still on my favourite list, you can be sure of that. Anyway, Frodo really blew it didn't he? I can't believe he's still being deceived by Lorelei. I thought he was past that when he realized the vision in the last chapter wasn't his mother. What's the Fellowship going to do now? I hope the Valerian root hasn't affected everyone. Hopefully some members are more resistant to it than others. I guess we'll find out in the next chapter, which I'm looking forward to greatly, as always. Author Reply: Sorry it's taken me SO long to respond to your review. I've been layed up recently and it's really slowed me down from doing the things I love. I know, just what I need to be SLOWER than my usual. Thanks for your review, super happy to be on your favorites list *blushes* | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/19/2005 |
| Oh my god! Again, the evil Lorelei (or Saruman) seems to have succeeded! Frodo will not make it far away at the state he is in. For a short moment I thought, that Aragorn was suspicious and did not drink of the tea, but no, he's also completely helpless! Something has to happen!!! If Frodo reaches Saruman, it will be his death, I'm afraid. Remembering "Chapter 12b", I wonder what Frodo will think of the story progress now? He will not be pleased with his obedience to Lorelei! But I think, that's absolutely believable! That's just how he might have reacted! *Prepares for the wrath of Frodo* Author Reply: I would hope Frodo would be so involved in fighting his demons he would forget about me and my untimely addition of chapters. he he...so sorry this has taken so long to get to you....things have been ... errr....hectic, to say the least. Love to you and thanks so much for reviewing. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/18/2005 |
| Alas, Frodo, following the advice of Saruman himself. Hopefully he won't injure himself sufficiently in this new adventure to lead to another several weeks in the cave as he recovers. Author Reply: I hope not too! I don't have all that much time before my family arrives to cure him, LOL. | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/18/2005 |
| Oh my goodness! I'm glad Frodo's healing physically, but Saruman has definitely found the hobbit's weakness -- his love and concern for the wellbeing of his friends and kin. That was a fascinating 'hypnosis' scene, too. How fascinating this is! Author Reply: I almost hypnotized myself in the bargain. That's what I get for writing till the wee hours of morning. His weakness is definately his friends well being but he will defeat Saruman in the end, I promise. | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/18/2005 |
| Nooooooooooo! *dances around* I can only hope that Gandalf is not affected by the potion! *bites nails* Author Reply: Nope...won't happen. I plan to continue writing on this fic until it's finished instead of switching, like I usually do, to my other two ongoing sagas. | |
| Starfire_Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/18/2005 |
| What! He left! And in his condition too. Can I please knock some sense into this hobbit? *grabs a frying pan and waits for approveal* :D Author Reply: *Gives permission and crinches back into corner to watch* No fear, he will, eventually, come to his senses. | |