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Children of Iluvatar  by Antane 5 Review(s)
AltheaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/10/2007
You've blended the words from the book nicely into your story. I love the silent conversations between Elrond and Eru.

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/14/2006
Wow! Oh, wow! These are amazing! I love it! I can't pick favourite parts because it's all so wonderful! Please do continue this!
God bless,
Galadriel

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/7/2006
Yes, the one to go all the way would be obvious, I think. And he sees the determination for all to do as they can, which is all any can ask of another.

The words of Elrond here are among the wisest spoken in the entire book, the advice not to seek to stand in the dark before one has seen the darkness fall.

And the others will not turn away until Frodo lets go their hands to walk alone as he must--save, of course, for Sam's continued presence.

Author Reply: I love the way you said about Frodo holding onto all those hands and then having to let go. So must we all at some time or another.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/7/2006
I hadn't thought about Elrond as yet another one who watches over Frodo from afar but this chapter makes it obvious that he is also part of the Fellowship in his own way.

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/7/2006
Clean and simple and spare, nicely done. The quotes from the book mesh well with your own writing. Sweet!

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