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By Chance or Purpose  by shirebound 11 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/26/2006
If only our beloved Merry's words had been true! But, yes, the story has gone on and on, and they are all in the center of it for the moment.

Author Reply: I always found that scene amongst the trolls very interesting. It really helps tie together Bilbo's adventure and the hobbits' journey many years later.

DaynawaynaReviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/26/2006
“It’s real, isn’t it?” Pippin whispered. “All of it. Trolls and… all of it?”

“Yes, it’s real,” Merry said softly. “I wish it wasn’t, but it is.” He helped his cousin on with his pack. “Don’t think about them anymore, Pip; I’m sure you’ll never see another troll.”

As they left the glade, Pippin cast one last backward glance at the massive, once-living creatures, forever frozen in stone.


How do you do it!?!? Oh.My.Gosh. You still never cease to amaze me. I didn't comment on the "he promised not to become a wraith" line earlier (though I should have... poor Merry's heartbreak was precious), but now this?? Of course we have full knowledge of their story before they do, but... wow. I'm so glad this plot bunny bit you so hard! LOL This is just wonderful! :)

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Dayna. This whole "Quarantined" series has been such a challenge, weaving together movie, book, AU, and my own ideas.

EdlynReviewed Chapter: 14 on 7/12/2006
“Don’t think about them anymore, Pip; I’m sure you’ll never see another troll.”

Famous last words, I think.

I'm really enjoying this story. You have a wonderful talent with wordcraft and I know that I'm going to enjoy all your other stories too.

Author Reply: Thank you, Edlyn! I'm very happy you're enjoying this. I just can't seem to stop writing this series of stories!

:D

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/21/2004
Oh my word! Pip will never see a troll again, will he? Famous last words...

pebblesReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/12/2003
I'm a little pressed for time these days, but I'm so glad that you have updated again. It makes it more fun for me when I can only get on the computer about once a week or so and all my favorite stories have updated! The bad thing is that I'll read until very late at night!

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/2/2003
Now you have me thinking of all sorts of nefarious reasons why the wraiths didn't take the ring - did they want him to make it to Rivendell, because they hoped to take Elrond and Vilya when they gained control of Frodo? That would add a whole level of intrigue, wouldn't it?

Zebra WallpaperReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/1/2003
“Not a chance,” Pippin huffed. “Never let it be said that a Took collapsed before a Baggins did.”
“I refuse to collapse,” Frodo said fiercely.
“So do I,” Pippin murmured.
“Apparently it doesn’t matter if we’re tired, Sam,” Merry sighed.
“Apparently not, Mr. Merry.”

You do fantastic hobbit banter. Just fantastic. And I love that all the hobbits are getting some time in this story and not just Frodo or whoever. You balance that very well.

Oooh, and Pippin with the trolls...very eerie.


Orangeblossom TookReviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/31/2003
I love this exchange:

“Not a chance,” Pippin huffed. “Never let it be said that a Took collapsed before a Baggins did.”

“I refuse to collapse,” Frodo said fiercely.

That is my brave Frodo and energetic Pip. *Sigh* Your excellent stories are always wonderful to read, Shire.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/30/2003
Once again, an excellent chapter. I love the bit about Pippin and the troll, excellent foreshadowing to future events in the story.

But the dog is barking, I must investigate, no time to leave more in this review.

Keep writing! (but I don't need to tell you that, do I?)

ElwenReviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/30/2003
I like the realisation dawning in this chapter.

Frodo realising that he's not just "carrying" the Ring. But that he is "bound up" with it.

Pippin realising that the world outside the Shire isn't a fairy story. That there realy are a lot more nasty things out there . . . apart from Ringwraiths of course.

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