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Children of Iluvatar  by Antane 7 Review(s)
AltheaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/10/2007
"I wish I could help you, my brother, but since I cannot, may you feel the Arms you are wrapped in, stronger than mine could ever be." This is beautiful.


LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/10/2007
Yes, forgive us, Father, for our hearts tend to be clouded often by fears.

Author Reply: I wonder at the patience of God, explaining to this child of His that all will be well and Elrond wondering and fearing still, not able to see all his Father can, just like no one us can see the end of our Road or even very far upon it. It's an interesting story to write.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

ElemmírëReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/5/2007
Another terrific look at Elrond's thoughts as Frodo is on his journey. I like how you added the iaun in as well. :D

~Elemmírë~

Author Reply: Hannon le, my dear! This is the story I'm least sure of in whether it's realistic so I'm glad that I have all these kind reviews to show that I'm wrong. :)

Namarie, God bles, Antane

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/5/2007
Aw *happy sigh* I am glad that you have updated this Antane. Elrond may not think that he can guard Frodo's Fea, (chapter 1,) but he is obviously being allowed to, albeit from a distance.

Author Reply: Hannon le, dear harrowcat. Sorry it's taking so long to update. I'm doing bits and pieces as I came across them as I'm re-reading the tale for Via so it'll be another long while but it'll be coming.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

AltheaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/4/2007
This is beautiful. I love this line especially, " I wish I could help you, my brother, but since I cannot, may you feel the Arms you are wrapped in, stronger than mine could ever be."

Author Reply: Hannon le! I so appreciate your kind words!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/4/2007
Oh, Antane, you don't know how much I love these! This one especially! I want to cry. So interesting that Elrond calls Frodo brother. This is encouraging, though I don't know why. Hantanyel, meldanya.
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Hantanyel right back, ammelda! :) So glad you are enjoying!

Namarie, God bless, Melinyel, Antane

eilujReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/4/2007
A lovely series. We can never have too much Elrond -- JRRT shows us so few glimpses of him.

Author Reply: Hannon le! I appreciate your support!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

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