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Elf, Interrupted: Book One: Glorfindel Redux by Fiondil	7 Review(s)
hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 37 on 12/6/2014
Ingwion made me smile in this chapter. I'm interested to see how this new friendship plays out. As the son of the Ingaran and one of the oldest elves, Ingwion will bring some unique experiences to the friendship. As haryon, I'm guessing he has similar duties to what Finrod has for his atar (holding his own court, etc). Perhaps this is one reason why Ingwion has the maturity to know when to "restart" things and see Glorfindel in a new light. Oh, and that's interesting that he's older than Arafinwë. Again, it will be interesting to see how this all plays out. Oh good, Alassiel and Glorfindel are going to get along. I got all kinds of exasperated at the reactions of some of the Vanyar, though. Really? Can they not just accept someone for who they are? It is, sadly, very true to life though. They are afraid, I think. Afraid that their paradigm will change, they their importance and sense of security might be in some way diminished. I think that it's interesting that those who seem most threatened and mistrustful of Glorfindel and his experiences are not those with the most to lose (Inwë and Arafinwë). Rather, it's the lesser important people who are the most insecure. And yet, it is surprising that so many people missed Lirulin beginning to fade. Perhaps fading is just less common in Aman. Then again, having Tinwetariel and Ingoldo for in-laws can't be helpful either, though I would hate to think of them actively contributing. Glorfindel, not surprisingly, knows exactly what to do. However painful, I think Lirulin needed to hear what Glorfindel had to say. Hopefully she is still able to take it to heart. "He much prefers people who defy him, spit in his face, and tell him where he can take himself." This made me laugh. I can't imagine who would have been that silly grins You have a wonderful way of "humanising" Atar. I don't mean that in a negative way, but I mean bringing him, in all his power and majesty, to a point where he would genuinely rejoice in the awakening of his children. So often, even in everyday life, he is so far and remote, and yet he is not. The lullaby was beautiful and brought tears to my eyes. I think, so far, it is one of my favourite parts of the story. It is a beautiful picture of the Father's love. The ending has me feeling uneasy. I get the feeling we're in for another round of adventure ;) Thank you for a beautiful chapter. Have a blessed day, Fiondil. Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Ingwion is several hundred years older than Arafinwë, actually, so I would think he's achieved a level of maturity, given his status, that allows him to "restart" things with Glorfindel. He will prove to be a very good for Glorfindel as you will see later on. I'm glad you like how I portray Atar even if indirectly. He may appear to be removed from everything but that is not really the case as we will see later on. This scene is one of my favorites also. As for the ending, yes, there is another round of adventure on its way. :) Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you found this chapter beautiful. Thank you for letting me know. I appreciate it very much.

Kaylee	Reviewed Chapter: 37 on 8/5/2008
sighs Lirulin, Lirulin...shakes head Glorfi is right about Lord Namo. He doesn't like quitters. He doesn't at all. hugs Ingwe Manwe's a very good big brother. dryly and probably only a big brother would think it was a good idea to leave his little brother asleep on the floor of his own dining hall. rolls eyes and grins ~Kaylee!! Author Reply: Never thought of Manwë as being Ingwë's big brother, but I think you must be right. And of course as a big brother he acts accordingly. grins I'm sure he found it most amusing to lay Ingwë on the floor the way he did.

Tari	Reviewed Chapter: 37 on 2/19/2008
This chapter deeply touched my heart. I thought the banter between Glorfindel and Ingowion (?) was the highlight. But, Iluvatar singing to his children as they awoke for the first time was priceless beyond measure. What an incredible joy. Tari Author Reply: Thanks, Tari. I'm glad you liked this chapter. We finally learn all about the lullaby that Námo sings to the elves in Mandos and what it's true significance is.

Larner	Reviewed Chapter: 37 on 2/12/2008
Ah--the oldest lullaby was the first waking song? And the proper song of comfort to those who waken to the knowledge they have died and need now to heal and find the strength and will to live once more. Author Reply: Yes, it took me a while to figure out where the lullaby originated but once I knew for sure then it made sense. I even show where Námo learns the lullaby in my other story The Wars of the Valar.

hanci	Reviewed Chapter: 37 on 2/14/2007
Homesickness... even Glorfindel has missed Gondolin already, he's not that different from other fosterlings. Glorfindel and Alassiel friendly, what will her anamillë think? :o) Lirulin... that was great. I hope the talking to will help. The change in Lirulin was probably so slow, so gradual that no one noticed. Námo must be relieved now. Námo's lullaby is not Námo's. I love the idea of Eru singing to elves at Cuiviénen, but a lullaby when they are waking? Why not, at least the waking isn't abrupt (terrible!). Nevertheless, what a nice first sound to hear. Author Reply: Well, it may not have started out as a lullaby, obviously, but Námo must have decided that singing it as one would trigger a sort of racial memory in its hearers and provide comfort to the fëar in his care. Seems to work, too, even with mortals.

Bodkin	Reviewed Chapter: 37 on 2/12/2007
Glorfindel is better able to realise Lirulin's state than most - but his recognition (and the lullaby) led to a mighty unusual outcome! After centuries of sedate life, the presence of the Reborn is certainly stirring old memories and new problems. I'm glad Alassiel and Glorfindel have - er - overcome their initial distrust of each other. Author Reply: I have written about that lullaby in almost every story featuring Námo but I didn't know unti I came to this chapter what its origins were. And yes, the presence of the Reborn is making a certain impact on the lives of the Amaneldi which can only be for the good, IMHO.

Ellie	Reviewed Chapter: 37 on 2/10/2007
How profoundly beautiful concerning the lullaby! And how amazing that everyone was put to sleep. With sleep often comes healing... This is such a great story! I really like Ingwe and his family (most of them anyway). You do them justice! Author Reply: I have used the motif of the "ancient lullaby" in all my stories with Námo without ever realizing, until I came to write this chapter, what it's source was and just how ancient it really is. Glad you like Ingwë and his family (or at least the ones that count grin).

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