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Four Seasons  by Citrine 5 Review(s)
Celeste Lucretia BlackReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/21/2021
Oh god

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/18/2007
In moments of such grief, to want to begin again would be so natural----

How very poignant and gentle.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/17/2007
So sad, but really beautiful!

Despite all the sadness these lines made me smile:

"But you won't leave me?"

"No," Pippin said, and he managed to smile. "I'm right here in your pocket again, just like old times."


What would Merry be without his Pippin?

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/16/2007
Oh!

Oh, so sad! I knew, I knew, *something* was off, but I wasn't quite sure what till Pippin spoke. Poor, dear Merry.

*sniffle*

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/16/2007
"Merry, Merry," Pippin said, and now there were tears in his eyes. "Look at me, come back from wherever you've gone and really look at me."

His cool hands, his aged cool hands, weathered and knotted, came up and cupped Merry's face, and Merry was afraid, something was going on, something terrible. He didn't want to be here, he didn't want to think about it, he didn't want to see, but the years were flying by him like leaves..."'Stella-"

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Beautiful! I'm teary. Beautiful and unexpected. So woonderfully handled, Citrine!

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