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| Dreamflower's Dribs and Drabs by Dreamflower | 7 Review(s) |
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| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/2/2009 |
| *shivers* Wow...yeah! I'd say that explains a lot! Author Reply: I'd think it would, you know! | |
| GamgeeFest | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/18/2008 |
| Oh, how terrible for poor Sam! This would only make him more protective of his dear master. Author Reply: Yes, it would. The fall was canon, and I'm sure it was horrible enough, but then to add in the idea that he could see one that looked like Frodo... | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/31/2008 |
| faces-- ghastly, gruesome, green and grinning Wow! The use of alliterations here was just perfect! Poor Sam, though! It must have been a horrible experience. It's some time ago since I last saw the movie. But I think *there* it was Frodo who saw Sam's face just before he fell into the water. Am I right? For each time I pointed this out to someone else they hadn't seen it. Author Reply: Alliteration just seemed called for here! I am sure it was just a dreadful experience--*shudder*. You know, it's quite possible. I don't recall that myself. But in the book, Sam's the first to stumble. | |
| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/31/2008 |
| Oh, poor Sam to have seen such a ghastly vision! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) Author Reply: Yes, poor Sam! Of course, the stumble was canon, but I just had to make it a bit angstier. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/30/2008 |
| Oh, how horrid an image for one like Sam! The Enemy had wanted to sow despair indeed with his spells! Author Reply: Yes, I thought it was pretty horrid! Of course, the stumble, which is canon, was horrid enough, and I had to add a little more. I'm thinking that it was either sort of like him seeing his worst fear; or perhaps a bit of dreadful prescience from when Frodo seemed dead after Shelob's attack. At any rate, a pretty dreadful experience. | |
| Virtuella | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/30/2008 |
| Spooky! Author Reply: Thanki you! | |
| Celeritas | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/30/2008 |
| Ack! Noooo! There's nothing more frightening than that. *hands Sam cookies and a warm fireplace to dry off* Seriously, this one was really good and utilized the dribble format perfectly, especially the last five lines. I was forced to slow down because of the entering and dwell on the concept even more. *shudders and hugs Sam once more for good measure* Author Reply: I know, poor Sam. The stumble was canon, but I just had to make it even more angsty. Thank you! It's actually in some ways harder to get these little things written than a drabble. You only have 55 words to work with, plus the line length. | |