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| A Teleri Treasury by Rhyselle | 7 Review(s) |
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| Nieriel Raina | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/13/2008 |
| Lovely! I love these snippets on Olwe! Author Reply: I'm so glad you liked it! | |
| Celeritas | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/13/2008 |
| *silly grin* This was so cute! Author Reply: I was grinning madly as I wrote this bit. I hoped that I didn't make it so sweet as to require an insulin warning. | |
| Independence1776 | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/12/2008 |
| This gave me some much needed laughs. Thank you. My favorite line: "We'll give you two weeks before we send out search parties." ~ Indy Author Reply: I'm so glad that it gave you the opportunity to bring mirth into your day. And that's my favorite line too! | |
| Edlyn | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/12/2008 |
| Awww! You wrote! This was so sweet, twinling! I can just see Earwen and Arafinwë blushing and the loving and (definitely) knowing expression on Olwë and Lirillë's faces. This is one way to escape any unwanted chivaree! Great job! Edlyn Author Reply: Well, you well remember that I wasn't able to escape the chivaree on my own honeymoon. I decided to have mercy on Arafinwe and Earwen instead. *grin* I'm glad you liked it! | |
| Virtuella | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/12/2008 |
| That is just too sweet for words! Well, obviously not, you've managed to put it into words, and very polished ones at that. ;-) Author Reply: I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this. Thanks for reviewing! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/12/2008 |
| For bride and groom to slip away alone together and get caught--and by Daddy! Heh! But at least the lessons of the last chapter have obviously sunk in! Author Reply: It was fun following up on the Sailing Lesson with the reason it was so necessary. :) | |
| Kaylee | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/12/2008 |
| Ada!" Eärwen's fair face went pink as she glanced up at her newlywed husband. "Daughter!" Olwë relented and smiled at the couple, opening his arms to them. He embraced them and then, keeping his arms about their shoulders, walked them to where the flower bedecked sailboat was moored. "You can sail away as you planned, but your Ammë and I were just making certain that you hadn't forgotten anything you'll need." Lirillë stepped off of the boat onto the pier, beaming at the younger elves. Arafinwë blinked, "But—how did you know? We kept our plan secret from everyone." Olwë clapped the prince on the shoulder, grinning. "That's my secret. Just get on board before the guests get curious." He kissed his daughter on the brow, and his new son likewise. "Be happy, my children. May the One bless you both." Once the couple had boarded, Olwë and Lirillë released the hithlain mooring ropes, and the elegant craft drifted away from the pier. "We'll give you two weeks before we send out search parties," Olwë called as the Noldo and his bride sailed off into the starlit night. He watched them out of sight, holding his own wife close. *laughs* Meldenya, I think this was the best part, though I loved the whole thing to pieces. Particularly Arafinwe's "But-how did you know?" Typical ner! *snort* *grin* Males...so clueless. *winks* Well, most of them anyway. Olwe certainly wasn't! ~Kaylee! Author Reply: *grin* I guess I can safely say that just about the whole thing was your favorite part. I'm very happy you enjoyed this so much! | |