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Adventures of an Éored: Sins of the Father  by Katzilla 2 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/4/2008
My goodness! Another absolutely taut chapter. You just pull and pull and pull until I feel I can no longer breathe.

Poor Eomer.... I still cannot forgive Arnhelm.... nor really Elfhelm....

Again, great chapter. Waiting breathlessly for the next!

One small error - The River's Edge part -
'Then the river had carried him away and whirled him around until he knew now longer...' I think it should be until he knew NO longer....

Author Reply: Hi Agape,

I must apologize to you, too, for having been away for so long. What can I say, the muses are fickle sometimes; and I didn't write for a long time this year. Yet I hope I will end this tale in time for the Mefa's,a nd I hope you'll enjoy the continuation of the story.

Greetings,
Katja

Lady BluejayReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/4/2008
Kill him off - don't you dare. I reckon that scout will find him! Anyway all this suffering will make Eomer a better warrior and king.

Look forward to the next. LBJ

Author Reply: Hi Sidonie,

sorry for disappearing for so long! My muse has been very busy with other things this year (so far), and I'M afraid I'm making slow progress. I hope you're still with me though.

Best wishes for this year's Mefas!! :-)

Cheers,
Katzilla

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