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| Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle by fan81981 | 12 Review(s) |
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| Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/12/2017 | |
| Please finish the story! I love how well you write and your development of the characters. Your unique plot is also highly commendable! This is one of the best tales I have read in a while. So please keep up the good work! Thanks!:) | |
| Marianel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/24/2015 |
| Im sorry I meant to say that it feels almost unnatural to supress so much of a person character.A Swedish word sneaked in from the wordlist in my phone-sjöresa. It actually means sea travel which is fairly fitting for elves too by coinsidence!😄 | |
| Marianel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/24/2015 |
| Please finish this story, its fascinating how you depict the Avari. Up to now I always though the Avari to be some more like other elves in their minds. Ofcourse they stand out and seems secretive and its possible they had other tradition s as most people or nations do.But your take on the Avari is very special and sometimes I feel sorry for them the unforgiving way they look at things and that they never(?) seem to enjoy themselves or do something other than duty.Its almost unnatural for a living being to sjöresa so much of their character.This is very interesting indeed.Please consider to update! | |
| Modelspice | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/31/2014 |
| Hey hey It's been a few years since I first read this story, and I've been faithfully checking regularly for updates. I'd be very happy if you would update your fans to this story with your feedback in the not too distance future. Thank you | |
| ellon | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 11/25/2013 |
| please oh please oh please finish this story!!!! :( | |
| SuperFan | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/18/2013 |
| Please oh please ohnPLEASE!!!!!!!! Finish this story! I'm dying to figure out what happens. Not only am I completely fascinated with your take on the Avari, the romantic tension between Legolas and Rhinure is some of the best I've ever read. I love this story so please finish it! | |
| Manuvern | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/25/2010 |
| I cant wait for the next chapter! The romance plot is outstanding and blends excellently with action. Hopefully a new chapter will be ready soon? | |
| Miss | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/6/2010 |
| Nice chapter, very intens!! She has build thick brickwalls around her heart. She cannot love, but she can satisfy her lust. | |
| shadowfax | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/10/2010 |
| Amazing chapter. But much more amazing to see this story being updated again!!! I hope you do not abandon it again and the updates are much more frequent now. About the chapter: A relief to see them actually discussing and talking about things close to their heart. Especially Rhinure. Their relationship has, for the most part, been physical and it will be interesting to see the actual 'bonding' between the 'Bonded'. Rhinure's denial of love isn't surprising. Her cold and dismal childhood coupled with the Avari upbringing and the demands of being Sacrifice have all combined to make her hide her heart so deep. The Lost Ones plot is so interesting. Hoping to hear more on that in the next chapter. If they act lost no longer then would it mean that L and R are ambushed and the Gondor trip happens not? | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/30/2009 |
| I did enjoy it, Fan! In particular, you do sexual tension better than anyone. | |