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| 'Til Death Do Us Part by Haleth | 5 Review(s) |
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| kat | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/25/2010 |
| Man you ruined my idea of who she might conceivably possibly be... I have to start over now. lol I check this site everyday looking soley for updates to this story! I have been using my phone since probably the 3rd chapter though and can't review, so now that my internet is fixed I just had to come back to this chapter and tell you, you ruined my idea... and that I love this story possibly as much as pitfalls. *sigh* starts thinking and waiting for more updates.. | |
| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/11/2010 |
| Haleth isn't the only one who's a bit confused. I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out what happens next. | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/4/2010 |
| Oh botheration! This chapter leaves me even more confused. I think I am feeling frustrated over who Haleth is, I mean if NO one remembers her real name then she must be very old indeed, this mysterious fog woven around her identity is umm.......very confusing, I think Inglor may know, it seems he is her protector in a way(even thou he has to protect himself from her temper) I wonder where she is now? In Mandos maybe? Well I can't figure it out, I think I am beginning to feel like Haleth does right now as if it doesn't really matter. I love the chapter and the way you write thou. Can't wait for the next. P.S. I'm taking it Inglor is not there? Author Reply: Thanks, Elflingimp. It is a confusing chapter. Haleth's memory has pretty much been wiped clean. She's certain she's in Mandos, but goodness knows if she's right. Inglor isn't in the vicinity. Thank you for reviewing. | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/3/2010 |
| Now that is a fascinating chapter. I am, as I am sure I am meant to be, as confused as Haleth - perhaps more so. But happily so! Author Reply: Thank-you, curiouswombat. It is really confusing, but I couldn't think of a way to make it less confusing. Hopefully the following chapters will make the confusion worthwhile. Haleth | |
| Siiw | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/3/2010 |
| And finally an update! Good to see you again. Doesn't Haleth know of the king's twin brother? And if this is set in the fourth age...he passed over the sea... i look forward to the next chapter and hope that it doesn't take this long the next time 8) Author Reply: Thank-you, Siiw. I apologize for the length of time between updates. This next part needed a great deal of editting. Haleth doesn't remember much of anything. Even her borrowed name has slipped her mind. Even if she did remember, she's certain she's dead and wouldn't expect to see the king's very much alive twin brother. I'll try to keep the updates a bit more regular from now on. Thanks again. Haleth | |