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Swan-song  by Lady Bluejay 3 Review(s)
CarysReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/23/2011
I love your stories, and I have been eagerly awaiting this chapter. That last line was superb, I had quite a chuckle. Hope to see more soon! :)

Author Reply: Thanks - I love to give my readers a quiet chuckle. LBJ

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/16/2011
Wow, what an exciting story! I especially enjoyed the part about Amrothos being lost in the desert... He really kept his head in a nasty situation, didn't he? Not a useless lordling after all!

So glad that he and his men (except the Haradric guide -- did he die?) are safely home now, and that he is with Devoran now.

I enjoy your Éomer and Lothíriel stories, and your Amrothos and Devoran ones, too. Such a wealth of details -- like Drummer getting Amroth's favorite hound pregnant, whoops! And I could feel the sand lashing my cracked lips and dry mouth....

Well done, LBJ!

- Barbara


Author Reply: Thanks - the guide made it back - guiding the others - to raise the alarm. LBJ

AzureSkyeReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/15/2011
LOL! What an ending! I'd forgotten Amroth didn't know Devoran was pregnant. Glad this story came to a happy conclusion, though its not quite over yet. And I like the conclusion with the girls, it was believable as well. Great as always!

Author Reply: There's quite a lot to come, but only a bit from Amroth. Unless he squeezes in somewhere else. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

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