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| Murder Most Foul by Larner | 2 Review(s) |
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| Branwyn | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/21/2011 |
| Hmmm, if Benargil had doubts about the investigation, why didn't he raise them earlier? Or did he? That sounds like one of the worst dinner parties ever, but it was good that the Elf decided to join them. He may not want to be there, but he is taking his assignment seriously. Lol at Benargil's combover--mark of banality or mark of evil? :D Author Reply: Good question as to why Benargil didn't question things earlier, but--hey! He took Enelmir's word that everything was on the up and up, after all. And the combover is more vanity than anything else, I suspect. Heh! | |
| Szepilona10 | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/9/2011 |
| What a *lovely* diner conversation! It reminds me of something that my 11-year-old brother would probably say! I'm glad to see that Harolfileg is trying to adapt. It would be kinda difficult to live your entire life looking down on mortals and then having to work with them as equals...not that the mortals are inferior, but they lack the yeni of experience that Harolfileg has. Anyway, I enjoyed meeting Benargil and his household and I sense there are some very interesting chapters coming up! Update soon please! God Bless! ~Szepilona10~ PS: Now that I looked it up I am quite certain that I was using incompetent in the wrong sense. It's not quite the word I was looking for, but I have yet to find the right one... Author Reply: Oh, yes, most uncomfortable, I'm certain! And I do think you're right about Harolfileg. Thanks so, Szepilona! | |