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Murder Most Foul  by Larner 2 Review(s)
BranwynReviewed Chapter: 14 on 11/24/2011
Those guardsmen were rather selective about whom they questioned and whose testimony they believed. Berevrion's discomfiture at the mention of oral sex was funny. He is not quite unflappable. Odd that no one considered that Danarion was recovering from a broken arm and couldn't have done the things he was accused of. But people were just seeing what they wanted to see.

Author Reply: You have nailed it exactly, Branwyn.

Szepilona10Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/27/2011
One has feel sorry for Berevrion and co. All that information and conflicting 'testimonies' is making my head spin! When Berevrion was talking about his daughter and her allergies I was thinking about alternatives to cow's milk and I had a vision of Berevrion sitting outside engrossed in some sort of missive or other important document while his clothes were being eaten by goats! :) Cool chapter!
God Bless!

~Szepilona10~

Author Reply: Poor guy! Yes, to ignore the fact one was surrounded by goats while distracted could indeed lead to disaster! Hehehehe! Now you have me giggling. And, yes, there are a lot of contradictions--and it was--interesting--to find euphemisms for euphemisms. Heh!

Thanks, Szepilona.

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