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The Journey Home  by Fiondil 13 Review(s)
obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/8/2013
That was a surprise to have Maglor's hand healed. If that is not a sign that all is forgiven. Now he can look to the future... and to Gloredhel. She is determined and he better give in. Makes for a much happier ellith.

Author Reply: Very true, obsidian, on all counts. As for what the future will bring to any of them, that will be revealed in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. It's appreciated very much.

TariReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/7/2013
The most difficult thing Maglor will ever have to do is return the Silmaril to the earth and then renounce his oath. He perservered and showed his true strength. A little romance for him is long overdue. I think you will present a new and much happier Maglor in the chapters to come; at least I hope you will.

Author Reply: Yes, Maglor will be a much happier Elf in the chapters to come, as you will see, Tari. He's done the hsrdest thing and persevered and now it's time to move on and have a real life, as you will see. Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.

FreyalynReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/5/2013
Lovely story - I've really enjoyed it.

Author Reply: I'm glad you've enjoyed the story, Freyalyn, and I appreciate you telling me, but it's not over yet. There are still several more chapters to go, so please continue reading.

KevanaReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/4/2013
Oh Maglor, bless your heart and your harp. And Gloredhel, get 'em, gal! That pair is going to make some waves together when they show up in Valinor. I love this chapter, everything is beautiful and nothing hurts. Not even his poor hand. I can only imagine...

-Kevana

Author Reply: Hi Kevana. I'm glad you loved this chapter. It is a lovely chapter, isn't it? After all the angst that came before, there is great relief on everyone's part, a huge cosmic sigh. I imagine even the Valar were doing a lot of high-fives and happy dances at this point. *grin* Thanks for reviewing. I quite appreciate it.

LyanaReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/4/2013
Ahhhh... you always have to watch out for those shy, quiet ones. They tend to know what they want, have a spine of steel and be persistent to a fault. If Gloredhel has him in her sights, great lord or no, he doesn't have a chance. :-)

It is lovely to see Maglor free; looking forward to seeing him grow into his freedom.

Author Reply: That's right, Lyana. We quiet ones are very dangerous when we wnat to be. LOL! And no, Maglor doesn't stand a snowball's chance in Angband against Glóredhel. We'll see how Maglor grows into his freedom with the next chapter. THanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.

6336Reviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/4/2013
Yay! Maglor's back and he is singing again! He probably wasn't really with it when he woke the first time and wanted his harp, it is the only certain thing in his life. How happy he must be to be pain free at last, it is not until it is not there that you realize just how much of your energy it consumes.

Good to see that he and Gloredhil have come to an understanding, let's hope it not a couple of yeni before they decided to do any thing about it, I am not in favor of long engagements.

Well another 30 minutes before I can call and get my Jury Duty changed to the local court and not the down town one, a lot less hassle and free parking!

Huggs,
Lynda





Author Reply: Hi Lynda. Yes, you little realize how much energy you're consuming when dealing with pain, especially long-term pain to which you've adapted, until it's no longer there. The relief is enormous, as we see with Maglor.

We'll see how he and Glóredhel get along and what kind of understanding they have in the next chapter.

Good luck with the jury duty thing and thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. It's much appreciated. Hugs back.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/3/2013
I find myself rejoicing to see him doing the same! And he is opening himself to a full life once more.

Author Reply: I'm glad, Larner. There is much to rejoice in. And Maglor is indeed opening himself to a full life once more, for which we may all be thankful. Thanks for commenting. It's appreciated.

LaerReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/3/2013
So his therapist is a harp and songs ;) I am glad Maglor and Glóredhel have sorted their feelings a bit. Now for them to decide exactly what those feeling mean to each other. LOL! I have a feeling there will be more coupling and a few elflings...maybe not here, but when they reach "home" siiiiggghhhhhh. Hopeless romantic here.

Author Reply: Hi laer. Yeah, I guess you can say that. LOL! As for what lies in the future between Maglor and Glóredhel, we will see in the next chapter. And there's nothing wrong with being a hopeless romantic. I'm one too and if there were more hopeless romantics around the world might be a nicer place. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. It's very much appreciated.

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/3/2013
Ah - the healing is a sign that all can understand - and what a blessing for Maglor. How good, too, to see an understanding growing between him and Glóredhel; I hope neither comes to harm in their upcoming tasks.

Author Reply: Hi curiouswombat. Yes, a real blessing for Maglor. We'll see how things go with him and Glóredhel in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 35 on 6/3/2013
Ok, I'm done with the heartache, Welcome the Romance! He has every right to be happy and he has found the perfect girl! But knowing you, I'm so worried!

So happy that his hand is healed and he is able to sing. I'm really happy for him! (in case that you haven't notice my euphoria)

Like Maglor's comment about him be the natural leader, even if the others do not realize it. He is a Great Lord, with capital letters. He outranks anyone in Earth now, including Glorfindel, the twins and any other elves surviving around the planet.

Now to see what adventures are coming in this short summer.

Author Reply: Hi Fantasia. Maglor is indeed a natural leader and a great lord, even if the others don't realize it. He was brought up to be responsible for others and that will never change. We'll see in the next chapter how he and the others fare now that the Silmaril is no longer a problem. Thanks for taking the time to review. It's very much appreciated.

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