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| No Greater Love, Part Two: Repercussions by MJ | 5 Review(s) |
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| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/13/2014 |
| A great chapter, MU. It took my ENTIRE lunch hour to read it but it was worth it. It will be intesting to see how it works out and whether the Valar have a clue about washing dishes or sweeping floors. LOL! Only found one oopsie: "But Mortal thought they be, the periannath are not Men...." It should be "though". Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/13/2014 |
| Boxing Day reversal of roles predates Christianity, even. Glad to see it finding its place in Aman among the Ainur. I hope the dissidents don't find a way to damage it before it becomes a custom, and that they realize that they have a true chance to honor one another as is the greatest form of praise and delight. | |
| Kevana | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/12/2014 |
| This chapter was absolutely adorable! I'd like to do something like that sometime, it sounds wonderful and a great way to show appreciation. And of course it's simply precious to see them all as one big if slightly dysfunctional family. I would love to hear some hobbit music myself, haha. ;) This story is so heartwarming, really. I always smile every time I see you have updated. Great work and thanks for posting. Have a spectacular evening and lots of good wishes to you and yours! Take care, -Kevana | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/12/2014 |
| And the stage is set, both for genuine appreciation and a comeuppance for some. Very, very clever. | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/12/2014 |
| What a lovely chapter - I cannot easily pick out any favourite part, as so much of it made me smile. Thank you. | |