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| The Unquenchable Light by Virtuella | 2 Review(s) |
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| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/24/2025 |
| Thank you for explaining about the white peacock! That helps. Now I don't have to go back and read earlier chapters but can press on and go forward... Poor Margig, I was wondering how he was coping with his daughter's prolonged absence. I like that he goes ahead and makes the festive cakes, remembering Jarin as he works. Hmmm. Wan is wary of elves, is he? Uh-oh. Elves. Most of these elves seem rather silly which could be dangerous. I'm glad that Lossė seems friendly. Let's hope it lasts. After they meet the one who chides the "children" for always wanting to save their lands, I feel sorry for these elves. What makes them different? indeed! But I have to wonder if the Hwenti would actually be able to defend themselves if a battle arose. They seem awfully jaded and hollow. Is this what fading looks like? Miriel sounds wiser than Tilar. I love the description of the winter solstice celebration. But oh no! Vani's statue is smashed and the darkness cannot be dissipated, it seems! Author Reply: I think these elves, lacking purpose and guidance, would go a little insane over the millennia. "Rudderless" is the word I have in mind. | |
| Leithian | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/3/2025 |
| Thanks for another great chapter. And I wish you a very happy new Year. Author Reply: And the same to you! | |