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| An Unexpected Adventure by KathyG | 1 Review(s) |
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| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 3/31/2025 |
| Oh! Bilbo telling Kaylee the story of The Hobbit! What could be more perfect? (Oh, but further along in the chapter, it doesn't sound so great in Kaylee's case...) This part of the story is difficult to revisit, especially so soon after I'd been working on this part of Bill's account. "Joseph McCloud!" Kevin said sharply. "Behave yourself!" That sounds so familiar! And if he had to ratchet it up a notch, I imagine he'll include his brother's middle name. Right? (What are parents thinking when they don't give a child a middle name? LOL) But good of Joey to defend poor Bill. And how lovely of Frodo to understand how important the children's request was to them. Uh-oh. And now I'm getting worried about Joey's ability to jump those wide cracks! I love the protectiveness the kids display towards each other when the "snakes" emerge. Hmmm. And now I'm wondering if an "emergency" will come up where they need to use their flashlights? Kevin has a lot of good food for thought by the end of the chapter! (Here's hoping I can carve out some reading time tomorrow for the next chapter!) Author Reply: Hmm. Dreamflower and I didn't think about having Kevin include Joseph's middle name! I'll have to see if that's something I can fix. There will be need for at least one flashlight, anyway, as the story progresses. Speaking of Bill's account, I'm looking forward to reading Part 2 when you start posting it! Yes. Kevin does, doesn't he? Have lots of good for thought, I mean. | |