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Caretakers  by Grey Wonderer 112 Review(s)
justionqReviewed Chapter: 18 on 1/22/2007
are merry and pippin brothers in the movie?

ScoutsonnrReviewed Chapter: 20 on 9/22/2004
Very nicely done! Great work, as usual!

Author Reply: Well, hello and thanks for reading this. I always enjoy getting reviews on stories that I think have fallen to the back of the site. LOL It's such a lovely surprise. Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed this one.

AuntiemeeshReviewed Chapter: 20 on 6/11/2004
I loved finding bits of your other stories in this one. I very much liked the stoy about the puzzle box and it was nice to see Pippin get one of his own. I was so happy to see Pippin and Merry reunited at least, with Pippin knowing his Merry was there to catch him if he started to fall. Thank you for this wonderful story!

Author Reply: Thank you for the wonderful review! I may have yet another story involving the puzzle boxes in the near future. I seem to be hooked on them. Oh, and hooked on Merry and Pippin too!

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 6/2/2004
This was too good!!! ROFL!! I thought the puzzle box was a sweet touch--remembering The Wizard's Coin and Thinking of You. What a beautiful story! Take your bow, Grey Wonderer!


Author Reply: Thank you! Thank you! I seem to have a thing for puzzle boxes, don't I?Thank you for reading and reviewing this one.It was a very long time in getting finished. Grey_Wonderer may need a long nap now.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 6/2/2004
"When did he leave?" Gimli demanded, taking a step to meet her. The two were now standing toe to toe and glaring at one another over the linens. - Grey Wonderer

LOL!!! Is Glynnith going to be Gimli's love interest??? They were made for each other! ;-)

Seems Legolas and Gimli are acting a bit odd...Hmmm. Next chapter....


Author Reply: Now that would be a story and a half to try wouldn't it? A Gimli romance! Glynnith was simply supposed to remind Pip of Gimli a bit in appearance when I started this, but I had to at least let her and Gimli have a moment alone. Who knows? I suppose I could call it "Love among the Linens". My what a strange plot bunnie this would be!

IorhaelReviewed Chapter: 10 on 6/2/2004
And Pippin got acquainted with the soldiers too! That's good!

Author Reply: He's been a busy little hobbit!

IorhaelReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/2/2004
"He is Frodo’s excuse to look after Merry,"

how very true! I'm amazed at how you have your characters' speech. Sounds so natural!

Author Reply: Thank you so much. I try to make them say what I think they might, but sometimes it's hard to tell if it is coming out right.

IorhaelReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/2/2004
Yes, Pippin and Glynnith are becoming friends now. Good for Pippin for he definitely needs a friend!

Author Reply: Everyone can always use another friend. Even Pippin.

TialysReviewed Chapter: 20 on 6/1/2004
Wonderful story with an excellent ending. You write the fellowship so well, descriptions and dialogue. The puzzle box was also a lovely touch. Thanks for sharing your story!

Author Reply: Thank you for the lovely reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed the puzzle box and thank you for enjoying my attempt at a Fellowship story. I usually stick with the hobbits and Gandalf. I was worried about Legolas. Thank you.

ElenarReviewed Chapter: 20 on 6/1/2004
Great story. I really like how you ended it. Poor Gandalf, I hope it doesn't take him too long to get the stain out. And poor Pippin being the only one who missed out on the ale.

Author Reply: Oh, I am sure that Gandlaf will come up with something. Pippin, on the other hand, may enjoy watching the others try to get themselves out of trouble almost as much as he would have enjoyed the ale. Then again, Gandlaf may just make everyone have some ale so that they can all share his embarrasment. LOL Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

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