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| Pitfalls of the Palantir by Haleth | 253 Review(s) |
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| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 2/28/2016 |
| This was a lot of fun! I really enjoyed it -- I like the characters, and there was definitely enough mystery about both to keep me guessing. I'm glad to see there are a few more stories, I'll have to check them out! :-) Thanks for writing! | |
| Idhrandir | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/29/2014 |
| Very nice short story. :) Was looking for more information on Lossoths but this story is actually very well written and nice:) | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 7/24/2011 |
| Ack! hows she gonna get out of this one I wonder? Author Reply: Someone will fish her out of the drink! | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 36 on 7/24/2011 |
| Poor Inglor ! Author Reply: Poor Inglor indeed! | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 7/24/2011 |
| Ouch! I cant believe she doesn't know what that ring means ! dang and I thought Inglor was clueless! Author Reply: In their own way they're both utterly clueless. Usually about different things but mostly about each other. | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 7/24/2011 |
| Typo- "weighs heavily (on) my mind... And Who is Inglor that everyone keeps asking Haleth that? Author Reply: Fixed the typo. Thank-you! No one really knows who Inglor is apart from him being Inglor. They're very curious about him, though. People think that Haleth, of all people, should know his true identity. She doesn't of course, but that's partially because she's too stubborn to ask him. Thank-you for reviewing, Aelfwine. | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 7/24/2011 |
| ok I am confused. How did they know about Tang and what does it mean other than a breakfast drink ? also Inglor as Haleth's accomplice? Hmmm Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing again. Haleth's appearance doesn't do much to inspire confidence. They think she's on their side...sort of...maybe. Haleth also tends to be hypersensitive to people. She's got a huge inferiority complex. All of her interactions with other people tend to get filtered through it. | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 7/24/2011 |
| There is the dwarf...is he gonna tell them to get a room already ? * grin* Author Reply: Nah. The palantir is way more exciting than anything a couple of big folk might get up to. | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/24/2011 |
| I hope you dont mind my proofreading a little? I found another typo in "I don't have years(to)analyse everything" Author Reply: Thank-you. Proof reading is always appreciated. I've added the to. Analyse/analyze is a British/US spelling difference. | |
| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/24/2011 |
| OMG! ROFL ! I've come to the conclusion that Inglor's father must have traveled west when Inglor was very ,very young . It apears No one has had 'the talk' with our elf! Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing, Aelfwine. I'm not so sure that Inglor hasn't had the talk or if he can't imagine anyone being so uncouth as to suggest something so improper. Haleth doesn't want to disillusion him. It was be WAY too embarrassing! | |