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Pitfalls of the Palantir  by Haleth 253 Review(s)
Avalon EstelReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/2/2005
Oh, dear. A walrus... in Middle-Earth...

This is going to be great!

Goodness, that was so funny! I loved the line about the superlatives.

Update soon!

Author Reply: Thank-you for the review, Avalon Estel.

It's not easy imagining what is going through a walrus's head. Probably something along the lines of 'can I eat it?' or 'Can it eat me?'

Poor Odob, he's still hungry.


Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/2/2005
Oh, dear, are you going to make me read this story all over again?

*Great big sappy grin* Way to go, Haleth! *Two thumbs up*

- Barbara, who could definitely use some heavy-duty cheering up right about now...

Author Reply: Sorry, Elena! Look at it this way; I have to proof-read and polish it again. Thanks for reviewing and I hope things look up for you.

Haleth

DAYNAReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/2/2005
OOOOoooooOOOOOooooooo!!!! Walrus mystery and intrigue! I'm hooked, Haleth! This is gonna be a fun ride, I can already tell! :D

Author Reply: Thanks, DAYNA. I hope the rest of the tale will be as enjoyable.

Haleth

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