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Untrodden Path  by Timmy2222 181 Review(s)
Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/28/2006
Just a note to say I've sent 2 e mails and hope you received them safely.I'm worried some mail is getting lost in cyberpace.If you didn't get them please let me know.

I hope one day you will return to Aragorn even if just for a one chapter story.I hope your version of him.

viggomaniacReviewed Chapter: 28 on 9/22/2006
I guess it would be pretty hard for Daevan to try and reason with the dwarves but he proves himself quite apt in this regard too. Greedy dwarves, though they do have their uses. And what, perchance, made this young man imagine he could bypass the orcs unseen? Oh. It was you that did that. I'd almost forgotten since I got so wrapped up in the storytelling. Good thing the rope held. Your statement that 'he tried to forget that he would be stuck forever in this cleft if the rope tore apart' was chilling. Brrrrr! Honestly, Strider never lets up. What a (fantasy) guy! So admirable! So...now wait a minute. I'm starting to sound like a fangirl again. Ah, why not. BTW, planning on watching Alatriste? (You know, the new Viggo movie)...I think I could put up with subtitles in this case. Back to your story. (I feel like a reporter for some TV newscast). The Hammer of Aule! Wow! Silly dwarves. Can't decide about them. They bicker constantly. But Strider's right. They NEED to get out of there. Will Daevan abandon him? Of course not. At least, I don't imagine it happening.

Sorry for the incredibly long time it took me to review. But as always, it's a treat to read your stories. Hope you are doing well.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 8/17/2006
Your last fan-fic for LOTR for a time? I grieve this is so, but rejoice that I had the chance to read it.

And I look forward to the time you return and we read more.

Thank you for so much.

Author Reply: You're very welcome. Like Mr. Bond I'd say 'never say never again', but my mind's set on other subjects right now. I loved writing the stories you see posted on this site, but I can only write when my heart's with it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Larner.

- T.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 31 on 8/17/2006
A most proper thanks for services rendered, and proper respect shown for prowess and dedication.

Lovely.

Author Reply: I'm so flattered... Thanks a lot for your comment.

-T.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 30 on 8/14/2006
Hurrah! Hurrah! And the fight was well described--very well described.

Author Reply: Thank you, thank you

- T.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 29 on 8/14/2006
Yes, I am back and am trying to catch up again.

Lovely to catch Gollum relatively easily in the end. And good to see our Strider is working to keep going in spite of his injuries.

Now, to get out of there alive!

RSReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 7/6/2006
What a great ending! "Though I must say that your mouth is still faster than you sword." My heart leaped when Aragorn finally told Daeven who he truly is. Such a proud moment (I feel like a mom just bursting with pride during a graduation ceremony trying to hold back the tears!) Daevan have come a long way. I'm glad he's decided to stay with Aragorn.


Congratulations on your semi-final with "Castle"--love that story! Good luck with your other stories! I have no doubt you will aquire more fans! I do believe you have more ideas in that brilliant head of yours regarding my favorite Ranger. You did leave it with "Would I do you a favor if I recommend you to my old friend Halbarad to make a Ranger out of you?"



LaerienReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 7/4/2006
I was so very surprised and sad that this story came to such an abrupt end. I didn't expect it at all... :o(

But I am glad that I overcame my instinctive dislike of AU stories, and gave yours a chance. I truly enjoyed it, and was always happy to see it updated.

Though at times, I felt you leave all of the work for Daevan, and do not give our other hero enough credit, but then the whole story was more about Daevan, so I coul forgive that. :o)
I hope we shall see more stories about him... As a Ranger! :oD

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 7/3/2006
I just loved the ending to this story which caught me entirely by surprise as I feared it would be a "Goodbye,maybe we'll meet again one day"
I like to imagine Daervan as one of Aragorn's Grey Company in LOTR.
Good luck with your current projects!I hope one day you will write another LOTR story for you portray these characters,especially Aragorn,so beautifully.

grumpyReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 7/3/2006
Ah, the dwarves have their treasure and on their way home. Grima really is a slimeball. Good idea of Aragorn's to make Daevan a ranger, he will make a good one. Besides now that Strider, has let on who his is, better to keep an eye on him.
The UPS man, heard all the rucus and made it out of Moria, he slipped past everyone. A passing troll told him that Strider could be found in the north. Actually the troll said " oh look lunch, I wonder if it is tasty". But trolls do mumble so! Since the package does contain a safety helmet, which Strider will need later on in the Two Towers, when he falls off a cliff, it is a good thing that the Ups man and his St Bernard, are still on the job.
OK, on to other things, I loved this story, as I have loved your others, and do hope to see more from you again. Please!!!!!

Author Reply: Grumpy, your ideas are simply wonderful! Thanks so much for your support! I will miss your witty comments, but right now I can't think of writing Aragorn again. Yet I won't say never...

- T.

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