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Dreamflower's Dribs and Drabs  by Dreamflower 2 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 43 on 3/15/2013
I am so very impressed. You managed to keep within the form and yet told the tale so well.

Author Reply: Sestinas are hard in one way, and yet easy in another; scansion is not as important in a sestina, and rhymes are taken care of by the word-repetition.

I'm glad you thought the tale unfolded well within the form!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 43 on 7/7/2011
The wise fool and the fool of a wizard together kept the hope alight
that the darkness might, just might, be pushed back by clinging to the fight!

I stand in admiration for what you've written. One day I might just try a sestina, although I doubt I shall ever do as well as you have here.

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