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Antane's Anthology  by Antane 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/11/2006
Very beautiful, Antane. Very moving indeed.

Elanor SilmariŽnReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/28/2006
That sounded exactly like Frodo! Very well done!
God bless,
Ellie

Author Reply: Well, thank you, my dear! I do try. :) And thanks for all your other kind words about the other anthology stories!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Queen Galadriel--who is on the way home!Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/7/2006
Oh, wow. Angsty! But also beautiful. I'm so glad he reached for that hand. Now I'm going to cheat and read your wonderful-looking welcome present before I'm even all the way back, if I may! *Hee hee!* *Grins*
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Hantanyel, ammelda! Glad you enjoyed and that welcome back story. Thanks for your 'well I'm back' story too! Poor Sam, remembering having to kill...

Namarie, God bless, Melinyel, Antane :)

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/31/2006
instead of that false promise, I reached for the reality of his hand

A nice line. Good shivery piece with some lovely insights on the nature of darkness.

~~~{~@

Author Reply: Thank you - I like that line myself. :) Glad you enjoyed!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/31/2006
This made me shiver Antane. So much darkness but for the small sliver of light at the end. Well done.

Am out of internet range at Summer School/Retreat all this week so looking forward to getting back already but also looking forward to some seriously spiritual time too.

Hope you don't mind me pointing it out but I think this bit needs a little editing....

Who was left who I hadnít tried to destroy{ed}?

I had already tried to kill my best friend, my brother

And the one I said I wanted to save

Thatís what haunt{s} my nights

And leave{s} me screaming in terror



Author Reply: Well, that's pretty embarrassing - all those typos! :( but thanks for pointing them out (now fixed) and even more thanks for liking it anyways!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Starfire_MoonlightReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/31/2006
Call me a cry baby, I don't care, but this one almost made me burst into tears. I read it inside my head... then I read it aloud and I found it to be more powerful to be read aloud instead of inside my head. This was absoulutly beautiful and this has helped rid my writer's block! :D


Author Reply: Well, thank you! Glad to be of assistance! I'll have to try reading it out loud myself - it was scary enough just to read in my head.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

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