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Antane's Anthology  by Antane 4 Review(s)
harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/19/2007
Sorry Antane - taken a long time to review this.

My favourite bit? ......

Sometimes in the rain

So it could hide his tears

He continued to pour his love and hope into the garden that

Had always been tended for another,


Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/12/2007
Yes, this could indeed apply to either one, but I had a very vivid image of Frodo walking through a garden, reading this. I really like the slight suspense at the end. Lovely!
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Hantanyel, ammelda! I wanted to do it so both could be the one there - I love the idea of Frodo making a garden for his Sam and I saw Sam in always wishing his Frodo would be there (which of course Frodo would wish for his Sam, but for some reason it seemed more strongly to suggest Sam's longing there). Did you get my "fear"ful email? Has the conspiracy been unmasked? :)

Namarie, God bless, Melinyel, Antane :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/12/2007
Ah, yes, someday he will find that smile and familiar presence once more.

Author Reply: Indeed - a joy and brightness to outshine even that bright land. :)

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/12/2007
Sweet!

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