| We Were Young Once ~ III by Conquistadora | 195 Review(s) |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 7/31/2024 |
| Tauriel is a great character. Thank you so much for sharing your story!!!! You are the amazing writer!!!!! |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 50 on 7/31/2024 |
YOU ARE NOTHING, came the irate reply, aimed into the forest like a barb, its sting dissipated by the trees, MORIQUENDE, LORD OF SKULKING AVAMANYAR, NOTHING TO THE GREAT ELDARIN KINGS OF OLD WHO FELL BEFORE ME. YOU ARE NOT WORTHY TO CHALLENGE ME. Forgot about the breathing reading this parapgraph
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 49 on 7/31/2024 |
I apologize if you were inconvenienced by our misfortunes, Mithrandir,” Thranduil answered, his tone abrasively dry, “but I do not recall inviting you into the midst of them.” I agree with Thranduil. “I want the watch doubled at our borders, Commander,” Thranduil said, “all roads, all rivers. Nothing moves but I hear of it. And should anyone accomplish the safe capture of the creature Gollum, he will be handsomely rewarded.” I am s happy o added this line.
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 48 on 7/31/2024 |
| Wonderful chapter. The funeral scene is heartbreaking. |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 47 on 7/31/2024 |
| The battle is perfectly written!!!! I am glad that Thorin apologised for everything |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 46 on 7/31/2024 |
“To me! To me! Elves and Men! To me! O my kinsfolk!” Thorin thundered, calling everyone to join him, spearheading a charge directly down the center of the battlefield toward Bolg and his formidable bodyguard. How could Thorin call Elves after being so rude?
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 45 on 7/31/2024 |
| Love this chapter. |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 44 on 7/31/2024 |
Both Galadhmir and Bard shifted nervously where they stood. “Shall I post extra sentries, then?” Galadhmir asked.
“Yes,” Thranduil agreed, descending from the wall to join them. “I doubt I will sleep tonight, but do not dissuade the others from doing so.- I love how you described the atmosphere before the battle. |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 43 on 7/31/2024 |
| “Can we not instead hold it for Eryn Galen, my lord?” Dramegor asked, an aggressive glint in his eye. - interesting point. It makes me think if were any other Elves who thought in a similar way. |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 42 on 7/31/2024 |
| This scene is awesome!!!!! |
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