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Twins in Rohan  by Lady Bluejay 13 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/24/2009
Just re-read this over at HASA. I knew I had seen it before...

I love the 'new' title - and I also love the second chapter.

Fluid prose makes this special for me. As well as the voices of the twins - I think you have them down perfectly!

Blessings and thanks for the twisted laugh!

Author Reply: Thanks - glad I made you laugh, and you came back to read again. LBJ

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/11/2009
He really should have known! Heh!

Author Reply: Of course he should - especially being an elf!

Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/11/2009
LOL! Poor Elladan - but it serves him right. I hope Elrohir had more sense than to drink too much!


Jay


Author Reply: I doubt it! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/10/2009
Naughty thoughts are being raised here! Heh! And she thinks she can best an elf? Heh!

Author Reply: Very naughty thoughts - but its all in the mind! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

Idril CelebrindalReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009
OH that was great! Wasn't expecting the ending, more please indeed!

Well written drew me in!

Thanks for the giggle!

Idril

Author Reply: Glad I amused you. Your review is really appreciated. LB J

Simple Girl For YouReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009
Lady BlueJay,

LOVED IT. This was very clever the way you elude and insinuate to something romantic and its something completely different. MORE PLEASE. ;-)

Simple Girl For You

Author Reply: I can't promise more but if the muse strikes!Thank you for reviewing. LBJ

MarethielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009
Cute! Well done.

~Marethiel

Author Reply: Thank you. Your review is much appreciated.LBJ

Laikwal‚ssÍReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009
oh how I love this stories leading the reader into an unexpected direction. The twins eagerness for the girls "first time" however made me wonder but the end was hilarious. Really nice little story. Thank you. Lai

Author Reply: If I got you wondering I achieved my aim. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

6336Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009
Oh, this could be such a naughty little tale if one had a mind that worked that way! Hee, Hee,Hee!
Not me though, I'm a good girl I am!
More please,
Lynda

Author Reply: It's all in the mind - how true. Glad you enjoyed, Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009
You had me guessing as to what she actually wants to do and was very surprised as well with the twins' reaction and apparent willingness. The end just had me laughing out loud. A very nice short piece.

Author Reply: Thank you. Pleased I kept you guessing.LBJ

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