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| Twins in Rohan by Lady Bluejay | 14 Review(s) |
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| Shlain | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/23/2020 |
| Oh my goodness! I am laughing like crazy. When I first started reading I thought how could an author do this. It is not exactly canon. But now I can see a brave maiden of Rohan doing this. And the twins' dialogue is written so well. Let's blame the wine for the ambiguous meaning in their words. Great job. | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/24/2009 |
| Just re-read this over at HASA. I knew I had seen it before... I love the 'new' title - and I also love the second chapter. Fluid prose makes this special for me. As well as the voices of the twins - I think you have them down perfectly! Blessings and thanks for the twisted laugh! Author Reply: Thanks - glad I made you laugh, and you came back to read again. LBJ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/11/2009 |
| He really should have known! Heh! Author Reply: Of course he should - especially being an elf! Thanks for reviewing.LBJ | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/11/2009 |
| LOL! Poor Elladan - but it serves him right. I hope Elrohir had more sense than to drink too much! Jay Author Reply: I doubt it! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/10/2009 |
| Naughty thoughts are being raised here! Heh! And she thinks she can best an elf? Heh! Author Reply: Very naughty thoughts - but its all in the mind! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Idril Celebrindal | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
| OH that was great! Wasn't expecting the ending, more please indeed! Well written drew me in! Thanks for the giggle! Idril Author Reply: Glad I amused you. Your review is really appreciated. LB J | |
| Simple Girl For You | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
| Lady BlueJay, LOVED IT. This was very clever the way you elude and insinuate to something romantic and its something completely different. MORE PLEASE. ;-) Simple Girl For You Author Reply: I can't promise more but if the muse strikes!Thank you for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Marethiel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
~Marethiel Author Reply: Thank you. Your review is much appreciated.LBJ | |
| Laikwalâssê | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
| oh how I love this stories leading the reader into an unexpected direction. The twins eagerness for the girls "first time" however made me wonder but the end was hilarious. Really nice little story. Thank you. Lai Author Reply: If I got you wondering I achieved my aim. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |
| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| Oh, this could be such a naughty little tale if one had a mind that worked that way! Hee, Hee,Hee! Not me though, I'm a good girl I am! More please, Lynda Author Reply: It's all in the mind - how true. Glad you enjoyed, Thanks for reviewing.LBJ | |