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| A Long Walk Down a Short Pier by Grey Wonderer | 15 Review(s) |
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| Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/29/2014 | |
| Read and enjoyed this. Just thought I'd review. You do have a couple spelling errors though. | |
| GamgeeFest | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/6/2009 |
| *giggles* Pippin may have been mistaken about the boating, but he's got the flattery down pat! Incident with the sheep costume? :) Author Reply: Yes, Pippin is very charming, isn't he? The incident with the sheep costume is from "Merry had a Little Lamb". It's an older fiction of mine. http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=5512 | |
| Baggins Babe | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/3/2009 |
| I know where he'd like to put them but I don't think there's room in there and I'm not sure we could hold Mr. Merry down long enough to finish the job," Sam muttered. *snort* *gurgle* *gasp* Merry does know exactly how to push Frodo's buttons, doesn't he? And trust Sam to make an observation like this! As for Sheep Month in the Tooklands...........!!! Author Reply: Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed this. For some reason, I could just hear Sam saying that. hehehe And Sheep Month just sounds like a Tookland event to me. (I secretly want a sheep month anyone.) | |
| Baggins Babe | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/3/2009 |
| “Sounds that way,” Saradoc nodded. “I feel especially singled out since you and I are now drifting aimlessly in a boat.” I have always liked Saradoc and this remark just makes me love him more - priceless! Loved this, GW. Diamond's horror upon learning that Pip can swim, Merry's indignation that Pip has taken his boat......... And of course Diamond knows how to hook a future Thain. Brilliant! *giggles* Author Reply: Saradoc is one of my favorite characters for some reason. I am constantly putting him into my stories. Thank you for the lovely review and I am very glad that you enjoyed it. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/29/2009 |
| Ah, yes--she knows what she's after, and has hooked it firmly! Delightful! And Merry certainly appreciates Tooks in some ways better than Pippin does! Thanks for a wonderful giggle! Author Reply: You are most welcome. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I do think Merry has a special insight into Tooks thanks to his Mother and Pippin. hehehe | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 10/29/2009 |
| Ah, but trust Merry to see the illogic of it for Hobbiton and the Shire! And love Frodo's temper tamtrum! Author Reply: Merry was thinking this one over entirely too much. He needed to enjoy it, or maybe he enjoyed picking on Frodo a bit here. In any case I figure Frodo will celebrate anyway just as soon as he calms down. LOL | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/28/2009 |
| "Now, I’m going back to Brandy Hall and try to forget that you can swim." Awww! That's true love ;-) Great story! I especially enjoyed Merry's and Saradoc's commentary! Author Reply: Thank you. I suspect that as a Took and someone not comfortable around water, Diamond was better off not thinking about Pippin swimming. LOL It really must be true love. I always enjoy writing Saradoc so it was fun to have him and Merry commenting on Pippin's situation. I'm glad you enjoyed it. | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 10/28/2009 |
| Sheep Month? They'd love that one in the Tooklands. LOL!!! Although Merry can sometimes be really annoying with his logical thinking, his arguments are still highly comical :-) Sheep Month - what a splendid idea! Author Reply: I know! There really should be a Sheep Month! I'm glad you agree. LOL Thanks for reading and laughing. | |
| mews1945 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/28/2009 |
| Thoroughly enjoyable. I love Merry and Saradoc's observations on Tooks and courting and lasses. And Diamond certainly knows how to handle her hobbit. Author Reply: Thank you. I think Diamond will always have the upper hand in that relationship. : ) | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/28/2009 |
| LOLOLOLOLOLOL! *howl*guffaw*giggle*chortle*chuckle*snort*wipes eyes!* OK, this was just too funny! I loved the way you intertwined the two conversations-- but my favorite part was the reactions to Pippin's revelation that he could swim! That was a hoot! And Merry and Saradoc's running commentary the whole time... Great story, GW! I love your Pippin and Diamond. Author Reply: Thank you. I love the way you review with sound-words. It makes me feel like someone is in the room laughing. Then again, maybe I'm just hearing things. hehehe I had fun letting Saradoc and Merry do the commentary as if it were a sporting event and I always enjoy writing Saradoc. For some reason, I have always thought that if Pippin really could swim, it would be a source of some scandal among the Tooks since most hobbits were not very fond of the water. I could imagine Paladin trying to keep the topic from coming up and I could also see Diamond being completely shocked by it. Glad you enjoyed this one and thanks so much for the lovely review! | |