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Brother, where art thou?  by Laikwalss 50 Review(s)
FiondilReviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/3/2010
I read this a few weeks ago and meant to leave a review but real life got in the way (bleh!). I really enjoyed this story. It was full of suspense and there were times when I was (metaphorically speaking) biting my nails and sitting on the edge of my seat wondering if they were going to find Elladan in time. I liked the way the Elves dealt with the evil mayor and his despicable son and the way they rewarded the young couple who cared for Elladan. A well thought-out story with a very satisfying ending.

Author Reply: Hi Fiondil, thanks so much for the review. Ive nearly forgotten about the story, albeit it was always my favourite. Im glad you liked the story and that the suspense worked. Hope you have any nails left? I considered how the elves should deal with the men and thought first about something like a death sentence, but then remembered that elves would not like kinslaying und resented to this version and many agreed with me including you. Thanks! I liked the young couple also very much and the reward at the end was well given and my wish. I had done it this way. Thanks for the time to share your thoughts. I realy appreciate it. Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 12 on 4/6/2010
Glad the town has a new leader, wouldn't mind hearing a sequel...

Author Reply: Ive not planned a sequel but one never knows...its a tempting thought. Again thank you so much for all your thoughts. It was a delight to answer to them. Hope to see you at my other stories too. Lai.

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 11 on 4/6/2010
Very nice... They are back..Its true they are part of each others soul...

Author Reply: thank you. Yes, they are back. Its about time for all to relax again. Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/6/2010
Not good at all...

Author Reply: you are right. As I said Elrond will be hard pressed....Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/6/2010
I believe Elrohir needs more help right now than Elladan...

Author Reply: I fear you are right and Elrond will be hard pressed to look after them both. Thanks. Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/6/2010
Why did they not just take Elrohir with them in the wagon...

Author Reply: I have considered this, but I think Elrond did not want another ill child in the wild, rather he wanted to bring Elladan home as quickly as possible to bring them together and initiate the true healing. Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/6/2010
Elladan and Elrohir are not doing well at all...

Author Reply: no, they are not doing well, but now that Elrond has arrived, everything should be alright, or? Thanks for the review. Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/6/2010
Well, at least Elladan has awoken, but he is in terrible shape...

Author Reply: he has woken yes, but I can so sympathized with Isiwen and Maren. They are rather helpless despite they good intentions. I feel so sorry for them. Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/6/2010
Poor Elrohir, he is in despaiar...

Author Reply: yes poor Elrohir and his despair is more than adequate. Thanks for the time to review. I really appreciate it. Lai

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/6/2010
Elladan was found by good people, hope they find Elrohir and the rest of them...

Author Reply: fortunately Elladan was found by this good people, yes, but can they really help him? see in the next chapter. Lai

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