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'Til Death Do Us Part  by Haleth 5 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/9/2010
What a mess Haleth finds herself in. Will Inglor get beyond his preoccupation with building the ship enough to notice she is missing and go looking for her? I certainly hope so.

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, Tari. Eventuall Inglor will notice he's hungry. He may have some vague memory of Haleth going out for food, or he might climb to the sail loft to talk to her and then realize she's gone (after calling for her a few times and checking the dark corners to see if she's lurking there.)

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/8/2010
Well I'll bet that commotion might have the name of Inglor(I hope). LOL! Sorry I haven't been reviewing life has been too busy lately with graduations and such, I am glad all that's over and I can now rest. Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing, Elfingimp, and please don't apologize. Life is busy. Congratulations on the graduations! This can be a very busy time of the year for celebrations. Are you one of the graduates?

Inglor seems to have a talent for creating commotions, often unintentionally.

Thanks again!

Haleth

EluthaunReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/7/2010
How very much I have enjoyed this serial indeed!
I do tirelessly enjoy reading what you have written, and seemed to soar through reading all eight instalments in a single sitting!
Already I care deeply for the bitterness of Haleth's lot, to age in the face of her departing friend; and I do enjoy Inglor. I do think at length about much of what you have left unsaid too. That is perhaps the keenest pleasure of reading your work, the daydreams left for me to fulfill.
A warm thank you.
Pineheart.

Author Reply: Thank-you for your review, Eluthaun. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and that you find the characters -- or at least Haleth-- sympathetic. I'm very humbled that you consider these stories worthy of daydreams.

Haleth

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/6/2010
Poor Haleth - it never rains but it pours...

It would be nice to think Inglor was rushing to her rescue like the cavalry - but he's probably still deep in communion with his ship and hasn't even noticed that she's unavoidably delayed. Although a woman can hope.

Author Reply: Haleth learned a while back to not depend on Inglor to rescue her...although he still does, just not in the conventional, heroic sort of way.

Thank-you for reviewing.

Haleth

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/6/2010
I wonder who's coming? I hope it's Inglor, on his way to rescue Haleth - but has he even noticed she's missing?



Author Reply: Has Inglor noticed Haleth is missing?

He may have...if he eventually got hungry and thought to wonder why no one had provided him with food. ;)

Thanks for reviewing, Jay.

Haleth

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