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| 'Til Death Do Us Part by Haleth | 7 Review(s) |
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| Silmariën | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/19/2012 |
| Hi, it's Lily de Paris from fanfiction! (Thanks for the penname idea lol) I just realised that one of your stories (Castamir's heir) was not posted over there! I nearly missed it !!! It was fantastic, and it makes me even more curious about Haleth! You wrote that she has green eyes and reddish hair, that's very peculiar for a Númenórean ... First Caranthir and Fingolfin ... Who is she? You're a great writer! Hope reading the next chapter soon! Silmariën ^^ Author Reply: I didn't realize Castamir's Heir wasn't posted. How's that for not paying attention? Thank-you for reviewing. I hope the rest of the story doesn't diappoint you. | |
| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/4/2012 |
| I can't believe Haleth is so upset by the thought of being married to Inglor for the rest of eternity. I should think that would be a wonderful fate. Or is something else bothering her, something yet to be revealed. Author Reply: That part of the story wasn't developed as well as it should have been. I'm going to go back and edit this chapter to try to better explain Haleth's state or mind. Thank-you for reviewing. | |
| galathil | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/2/2012 |
| Fogot yo wish you a Happy New Year LOL Author Reply: Happy New Year to you, too! | |
| galathil | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/1/2012 |
| After reading the other reveiws, there is not much more I can add.Except that I am thoroughly enjoying the story.Can't wait for the next chapter.LOL Galthil Author Reply: Thank-you, Galathil. It's good to hear that you're enjoying the story even though it's being posted at a glacial rate. | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 12/29/2011 |
| Hahahahaha! Always Haleth and Inglor are soooo........unknowing of each other, it's like they can't see each other. Well Haleth had better buck up and accept things...right? But being Haleth this may be a problem. LOL Hugs The Imp P.S. I am going to reread this whole story, I think I need to, to remember some of the details and of course for the enjoyment. Author Reply: They do have a difficult time understanding each other. It doesn't help that neither of them is willing to directly speak of their feelings to each other. The slow pace that the story is being posted at makes it difficult to keep track. I'm sorry for that. Editting isn't something that comes easily. | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 12/29/2011 |
| Now isn't that just typical of Inglor! Honestly, I'm surprised he's allowed out without a leash. He can be such a jackass, even for an Elf. Poor Haleth. This should be very interesting. Author Reply: Inglor makes a lot of assumptions. If Haleth wan an elf, she would have a better chance of understanding his behavior. But she isn't and she isn't that familiar with his culture. Meanings that are as plain as day to him fly right over her head. The two of them do not communicate well with each other. Thank-you for reviewing, Fiondil. | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 12/29/2011 |
| Oh how very Haleth. To finally have proof positive that Inglor loves her - but not to really notice as her mind picks up a possible negative side to it all. Mind you, when it occurs to her that it clearly means he really does want to marry her, the idea of being stuck at the Noldor court for all infinity would be truly frightening! Author Reply: Looking back on it now, I should have written this chapter a bit differently and given Haleth more of a reason to be upset. I should go back and edit it. Still, Haleth does have a real talent for seeing the downside in everything and Inglor doesn't communicate well with her. I can see your point, too. Who would want to be on display at court for all of eternity where every single aspect of your behavior is analyzed and judged? Thank-you for reviewing and thank-you for the idea. | |