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Swan-song  by Lady Bluejay 2 Review(s)
AzureSkyeReviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/16/2011
I'm in complete agreement with Amroth. And the sandstorm was a wonderful idea, I had a cousin who was in Iraq and brought back picture of a storm, they certainly are impressive, and deadly. As I said, I completely sympathize with Amroth, but I hope he takes care of himself, with a toddler and a pregnant wife at home! Anyway, I'm glad Lothiriel had plenty of grandchildren to love and take care of, and probably spoil just a bit. ;) I'm interested in the line about the others that helped fill the void.... but I guess I'll have to wait and see. As always, excellent chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/16/2011
Ugh! The descriptions were rather horrifying and gruesome, they must be truly evil! I know that this is the way it is in war, I just hope that the girls will be rescued somehow, I am enjoying your story too and I just wanted to let you know I was reading it. Hugs The Imp

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