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Swan-song  by Lady Bluejay 2 Review(s)
RosealynnReviewed Chapter: 23 on 5/3/2012
I have followed your series and enjoy how you make the characters seem so real life with all the normal feelings and situations a person could find themselves in both today's world and middle-earth. The story is getting very interesting. Hope your hospital treatments went well. When can we expect an update on the story.

6336Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 4/11/2012
Oh, Eomer you really have messed things up this time, Should have told Elfwine when he was old enough to understand, now you have to deal with the consequences.

Galueth did not help any either, I have always wondered about that, being a healer she would know how to prevent pregnancy, so why did she allow herself to conceive? Did she want a child so badly that any one would do or did she want Eomer's child? She is also remiss in not telling Halmir as soon as he started asking questions. I wonder what Galueth's brother thinks of the whole thing?

Hope thay can get things sorted out, to every ones satisfaction and that Elfwine, who sounds a bit of a prig, at the moment, does not blame his father too much!

Huggs,
Lynda

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