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No Greater Love, Part Two: Repercussions  by MJ 5 Review(s)
PSWReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/4/2016
Am really enjoying this! *smiles happily*

For me, the sense of Olorin and Manwe's 'siblinghood' really started to gel in this chapter. They both seem as if it is becoming a more comfortable state of being for them...

Thanks again for writing!


UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/24/2013
Fantastic story. There is so much love to contemplate. Well done.

Author Reply: Thanks, I hope you continue to enjoy the tale as it progresses.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/24/2013
Discussions are often the best way to make options and necessary plans manifest. I rejoice they are now better placed to deal with their fellows and the uncertain Eldar.

Author Reply: They're getting there! Thanks for the comments.

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/24/2013
Beautiful, just perfect...and I know that it is completely out of topic, but Gosh, I miss my Dad so much, that unconditional love and so much wisdom.

Author Reply: As I lost my own father about eight years ago (and he was the great balancer in my family, making up for my abusive mother), I also miss him very much. Thanks for the review!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/24/2013
What a lovely experience for them (and us!).

And I especially enjoyed this small detail... "She does this as much for her own pleasure as for theirs."

Author Reply: Thank you kindly! I hesitate to say that Varda is a sweetheart, but I can't help but think she has a touch of that in her.

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