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No Greater Love, Part Two: Repercussions  by MJ 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/20/2014
Trust Olorin to make this connection, and to find a means to relieve his friend's concerns. Wise he is indeed!

I, too, have Frodo receiving a gift of a wind chime, and this one sounds so much more beautiful than mine! I love it!

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/20/2014
Another lovely chapter, MJ. The gifts given to Bilbo and Frodo were very appropriate to them both. The chimes sound exquisite. The conversation between Olórin and Turmanarmo was very poignant. It has to be so heartbreaking to love someone who has turned away from the Light and not be able to do anything to save them and wondering what their ultimate fate might be. I like Olórin's idea of Eru having a place apart for those Maiar who rebelled where perhaps they can reflect on what they have done and perhaps find their way back to the Light, but then, I'm a die-hard romantic. *grin*

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/20/2014
The gifts given to the hobbits are utterly wonderful. There's such love and gentleness in your story.

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