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Swan Song  by Conquistadora 5 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/8/2017
Nice description of the markets of Pelargir.

Imrahil as "Elessar's bulldog"; very appropriate!

PSWReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/3/2016
Hmm... Sadly, I fear they'll get their 'something of greater consequence'...

I hate most of all, I think, to think of Arwen having to put up with this, in a time that should be so joyful for her.

Interested to see how things go from here!

Author Reply: Very true. Just for that, I think I'll make sure she has something to say about it in the next chapter. There are so many characters swirling around now, and I'd hate for her to end up a piece of mute arm candy. Thank you!

someoneReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/31/2016
Falathir doesn't seem to realise just who he is plotting against. It is bad enough that he thinks he can win against Faramir, Imrahil and Aragorn, but to plot against an Elvenking with millenia of experience? There is no way he can win this. I'm looking forward to seeing how he intends to do it.

The image of Imrahil as a loyal bulldog is not one I have ever seen before!

Pelargir with its "fashionable" buildings sounds like it would be a fun place to visit.

Author Reply: Desperate times, and all that. Thanks for reading!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/26/2016
Ah, but how we love those who scheme behind the scenes to ruin those they ought to respect.

PSWReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/26/2016
Whew. The intrigue is deepening... Seems like everyone's in for a rougher ride than they might like...

Author Reply: Thanks for reading! We will try not to disappoint. :)

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