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Elf Academy 4 - The Unfinished Tales  by Fiondil 7 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/25/2016
Hmm. The Enemy is hijacking the dreams, eh? And they must find out for themselves what the dreams are and mean. I hope that they can get Glorfindel to agree to all of this!

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/19/2016
I love Ron's notes. Especially the descriptions of his skills "jaw dropping squared". They made me laugh. The rest of the notes are a bit sobering and that the Valar don't know how to treat "fading" is troublesome. It seems the facade of the all-knowing, allmighty "overlords" cracks. Good for Ron to get annoyed at them. I think the best treatment for Glorfindel would be to see his mortal friends as soon as possible.

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/16/2016

I know Time has no meaning for you, so I trust a late review won't matter to you or the Beta Amiga nettenyar. I've just been rereading this whole chapter again and again with no way to word what I want to say. "Ron is awesome" doesn't seem to be enough. Sitting down to a meeting with THREE Valar IN A CAFE and not freaking out? Yeah, Ron is awesome. (Much more awesome than a certain OTHER Ron with which I share half my DNA and wish I did not. >_< This is why I wanted you for my real Atto, because you're awesome and he isn't. But since I couldn't have you I wish I had Vorondur.)

I do hope the awesomeness of Ron can keep Glorfi from fading!!! *crosses fingers for Glorfi*



DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/15/2016
OK, I have to say I love that ended in banana splits!

Vorondur has been given a lot to think--and worry--about. Clearly Lord Namo wants to give more of a warning than allowed. But his hints, I think, will only make sense in hindsight.

Thank you again for continuing to bring this story to us.

SunnyReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/15/2016
I really, really, really like Ron! And his comments on Glorfy are a hoot! And I enjoyed the way he was butting heads with _three_ of the Valar and not giving an inch.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/14/2016

For some reason, throughout the chapter, my brain kept insisting that the chapter title was "Showdown at the OK Cafe"!

"Average by elvish standards" - this made me laugh. Loren is not the be-all and end-all of elvishness, as I might have thought... (and my spellchecker very seriously wanted to make him the be-all and end-all of Elvis...)

I love Ron's thoughtful response to Namo's question about his hostility.

Thank you for the review reply, for the explanation of fading -- and this chapter helps make it clearer. Chilling. (While inside, a little voice is wailing, "No-o-o-o-o-o! Save Glorfindel!")

Calling a priest instead? Could that be a certain dream-deceased priest who tried to reassure Loren earlier?

Am halfway through my second (and final) cup of coffee, and I need to get to work, but thank you for helping jumpstart my brain this morning.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/14/2016
The only word I have for this chapter is 'WOW!!!' I love Ron's appraisal of Glorfindel at the beginning of his notes. And the conversation with the Valar - Well...
I'm with Ron. In the event of the End of the World I want to be where Glorfindel is - even fading.

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