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| Elf Academy 4 - The Unfinished Tales by Fiondil | 7 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/25/2016 |
| Hmm. The Enemy is hijacking the dreams, eh? And they must find out for themselves what the dreams are and mean. I hope that they can get Glorfindel to agree to all of this! | |
| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/19/2016 |
| I love Ron's notes. Especially the descriptions of his skills "jaw dropping squared". They made me laugh. The rest of the notes are a bit sobering and that the Valar don't know how to treat "fading" is troublesome. It seems the facade of the all-knowing, allmighty "overlords" cracks. Good for Ron to get annoyed at them. I think the best treatment for Glorfindel would be to see his mortal friends as soon as possible. | |
| Kaylee Arafinwiel | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/16/2016 |
| Atya, I know Time has no meaning for you, so I trust a late review won't matter to you or the Beta Amiga nettenyar. I've just been rereading this whole chapter again and again with no way to word what I want to say. "Ron is awesome" doesn't seem to be enough. Sitting down to a meeting with THREE Valar IN A CAFE and not freaking out? Yeah, Ron is awesome. (Much more awesome than a certain OTHER Ron with which I share half my DNA and wish I did not. >_< This is why I wanted you for my real Atto, because you're awesome and he isn't. But since I couldn't have you I wish I had Vorondur.) I do hope the awesomeness of Ron can keep Glorfi from fading!!! *crosses fingers for Glorfi* Tye-melin, Kaylee | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/15/2016 |
| OK, I have to say I love that ended in banana splits! Vorondur has been given a lot to think--and worry--about. Clearly Lord Namo wants to give more of a warning than allowed. But his hints, I think, will only make sense in hindsight. Thank you again for continuing to bring this story to us. | |
| Sunny | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/15/2016 |
| I really, really, really like Ron! And his comments on Glorfy are a hoot! And I enjoyed the way he was butting heads with _three_ of the Valar and not giving an inch. | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/14/2016 |
| Hah! For some reason, throughout the chapter, my brain kept insisting that the chapter title was "Showdown at the OK Cafe"! "Average by elvish standards" - this made me laugh. Loren is not the be-all and end-all of elvishness, as I might have thought... (and my spellchecker very seriously wanted to make him the be-all and end-all of Elvis...) I love Ron's thoughtful response to Namo's question about his hostility. Thank you for the review reply, for the explanation of fading -- and this chapter helps make it clearer. Chilling. (While inside, a little voice is wailing, "No-o-o-o-o-o! Save Glorfindel!") Calling a priest instead? Could that be a certain dream-deceased priest who tried to reassure Loren earlier? Am halfway through my second (and final) cup of coffee, and I need to get to work, but thank you for helping jumpstart my brain this morning. | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/14/2016 |
| The only word I have for this chapter is 'WOW!!!' I love Ron's appraisal of Glorfindel at the beginning of his notes. And the conversation with the Valar - Well... I'm with Ron. In the event of the End of the World I want to be where Glorfindel is - even fading. | |