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Elf Academy 4 - The Unfinished Tales  by Fiondil 7 Review(s)
obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 37 on 10/16/2016
Poorn Raguel. Nobody is happy to see him. No wonder he is not happy with himself. It can't be easy. I like the Olorin and Tulkas tried to comfort him. It might not have worked immediately, but in time he will remember.

someoneReviewed Chapter: 37 on 10/15/2016
Poor Raguel! It must be hard to be among people that are only waiting for his reaction/judgement/talking-to. Tulkas and Olórin showed their good hearts in this chapter.

I'm looking forward to seeing how he is introduced to the Elves, and how they are going to react to the fact that even the valar have to answer to other(s). And also to how they are going to fix this mess with Alex.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 37 on 10/11/2016
Good heavens! What do the Elves *think* Raguel will do? He's there to do Atar's will, after all. Have they forgotten Eru's nature?

I was glad to see Olorin and Tulkas make an appearance. Olorin is and always will be my favorite Maia of all the Tolkien universe, and I kind of like Tulkas too.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 37 on 10/10/2016
At least Namo is willing to accept the chastisement he knows he's earned. Poor Alex does have healing to do, and an apology from Namo would most likely help a good deal, I think.

bootsgrandmaReviewed Chapter: 37 on 10/10/2016
I truly wish Fiondil's work was in book form. I get to the end of a chapter and long to continue reading BUT I must wait at least a week to do so.

I am ever so grateful his artistry is still available to us though. Thank you for the wonderful job you are doing in bringing it to us. A good story is soooo hard to put down though....and this is a good story and a great chapter.

Atar always has a reason for everything He does...reasons His children may not readily see. I think Atar sent Raquel to Arda to help him as much as Lord Namo and the other Valar.

Please Atar help me to have the patience to wait for more......

SunnyReviewed Chapter: 37 on 10/10/2016
Poor, put-upon Raguel! All the Valar and Maiar consider it obvious that he's here only to deliver A Lecture, and why won't he get on with it already, damnit! So I really loved how Olórin and Tulkas showed up to give him a bit of support. And I really lied tulkas here! "It takes two to tango", indeed! And the image of Manwë forced into a corner by the three Elven High Kings who all demand that he Do Something is just too amusing for words! ::snickers::

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 37 on 10/10/2016
I keep thinking there has to be a good-but-not-great chapter soon, but the great chapters just keep coming.

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