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Elf Academy 4 - The Unfinished Tales  by Fiondil 7 Review(s)
obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 41 on 11/9/2016
Gareth and Gwyn finally come to the place where their parents lived and nobody can/will tell them where they went. I don't trust this priest. He knows a lot more than he lets on.

JenniemReviewed Chapter: 41 on 11/9/2016
Thank you for posting this. I always wondered about Gwyn and Gareth's earlier lives as I just couldn't see them working the land for centuries, so I knew thy must have had a military career.

I hope you're feeling much better soon.

jgmscccReviewed Chapter: 41 on 11/8/2016
I agree with katharein and thank you for doing such a great job.
Sorry you are not feeling well.

kathareinReviewed Chapter: 41 on 11/8/2016
Splendid chapter! Reading this, and having revisited other Fiondil stories, I must ask - is there anything he didn't know/couldn't do? Mediaeval history, languages (Tolkien and real world), SCA, mythologies Tolkien and other, ribbon embroidery (sorry, couldn't resist ;-) you name it.

I don't know, and (kind of) don't want to know, how finished Fiondil left these stories. If youall are working from rough drafts or outlines you are doing a wonderful job of staying in character (Fiondil's) and continuing to develop his characters and plot lines. Just saying!

Best wishes and profound thanks. Post if and when you can and take care.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 41 on 11/8/2016
Aha! So, Elen is most likely the one able to tell what they wish to know, although I wouldn't put it past this "priest" to know, too, but to insist on keeping the knowledge to himself to drive these uncomfortable beings away as well. As a strategy, I'd guess it ain't gonna work.

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 41 on 11/8/2016
Hope you are feeling better! I don't mind the chapter going up today instead of yesterday - I barely noticed because I had such a busy day then. Today I needed something to perk me up. (I think we'll all need it, after today, no matter who wins. I wish we could have Gwyn or Gareth for President. Sigh.)

Anyway, it seems the brothers' adventure is getting interesting. So, Welsh Elves are they? Well, indeed :D But they aren't demons or soulless or...if there's anyone soulless in this chapter, I deem it to be the priest. What is his game? What does his wife (or so I assumed) know? I'm eagerly awaiting next week to find out!

Biggest hugs,


UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 41 on 11/8/2016
Hope you feel much better! Well, the brothers have a mystery that they will do doubt solve. Great writing. Thank you.

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