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Teitho!  by My blue rose 21 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/21/2016
Dawn has given her hope. I love how she is willing to sacrifice the sleeves of her chemise for Aragorn's sake, and she imagines that it might upset the Elves should they have to clean the bedding. She is quite innocent in her way. Love the details of her wardrobe, in which extra sleeves and the like are used to make it appear she has more clothing than she actually owns. But we know that Aragorn will know both safety and love here, before he must in the end return to his own people.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/21/2016
It was a choice he had to make, I know. And I rejoice that he chose life, and believe that in the end he was also glad, finding that even his most terrible suffering was yet blessed and assisted him to his greater healing in the end.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/21/2016
I am glad that Estel was given the chance to appreciate the history of this circlet. And I do hope that Elrond had the chance to return it as he'd planned for so long. To touch such a symbol of history would be quite the honor.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/20/2016
Oh my, what a marvelous image. I wonder if Aragorn sensed any of this?

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/20/2016
I enjoyed this conversation very much. How I would love to see that circlet myself!

Lothrandir Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/15/2016
A look into a dwarf's mind, is it? Even though I don't care too much about dwarves in general, this is really good. Yes, this was indeed interesting perspective.

Lothrandir Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/15/2016
And again, your research amazes me, you even remembered that Denethor wore chainmail under his robe. Even his personality and mindset are perfect. Also I love how Gandalf uses Ulmo's words to Turgon to counsel Denethor. You're really starting to show your skills, and I love every moment of reading your stories.

Lothrandir Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/15/2016
Yes, another chapter! I really enjoyed this one. Your storytelling reminds me of Fiondil, are you sure that you're not him reborn? ^^ I love how you don't present Namo as a villain, he really isn't. He has always struck me as more of a consoler than a judge. I wonder if Tolkien indented that as such, since he portrayed him as grim judge, not afraid of throwing the Noldor out when they rebelled. Anyways, keep up the good work!

LothrandirReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/15/2016
Like in your previous story, the research is spot on, I absolutely love it! I'm probably going to repeat it in every single story you post. ^^ I really must ask, where do you find your translations, or where did you learn so much about Elvish? Myself being an aspiring fanfiction writer, I'm really interested in learning the languages. Keep up the good work!

Author Reply: Ardalambion is the best site if you want to know more about Tolkien's languages. It also has downloadable dictionaries too.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/12/2016
Alas that Gimli would not marry and carry on the family's lineage. But he has managed to assist in the final victory against Sauron, and he has made a friendship that will surpass almost all within Middle Earth.

Love Hlin's ability to appreciate her lack of progress with her son.

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