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Serving Gondor  by Larner 44 Review(s)
Kathleen HenningReviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/18/2017
I loved the poem.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 11/5/2017
What a wonderful ending! I love the idea of the Mallorn trees as a means of communication between the Travellers. On days like this day, distance and time does not matter - only the joy to be together again.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/31/2017
Andred felt certain that there was the ghost of a smile on the distant Ringbearerís face at Captain Peregrinís naming of their beloved King

Can it be that the Ringbearer's face is mirroring Andred's feelings? That is fascinating!

And I very much liked the poem Pippin wrote about Sarn Gebir - especially the last passage.


TariReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/24/2017
Wonderful. I loved it.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/22/2017
That was a great chapter!

And I agree with another reviewer that Norien's case turned out to be more intriguing than Andred's. What was revealed step by step about the true character of her sister was almost incredible. And her husband is willing to give her another chance, although she tried to kill him, too?
Well, I wish him all the luck he can get.

spinsterReviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/16/2017
I always enjoy your stories, and this one was a standout.
I only intended to read the first chapter as a prelude to bed-time
but one led to two and then just one more until it is 6AM and I have spent the
spent the whole night reading your wonderfully crafted story.
Thank you

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/14/2017
Those two stories were very interesting and very different.

I wonder where the ring is, though. I am not so sure that it remained in Maridorn's possession. I would not be surprised if its new "owner" was Cotsedain.

ibonekiReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 10/11/2017
Gorgeous, wonderful story. I love all of your work, but my favorites are always the ones set after the war. Just the way you flesh out the community with believable OCs and of course the characters we already know and love. Always so consistently well-written it feels utterly canonical, and frankly sticks in my brain that way. Thank you once again for the amazing work!

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/7/2017
Many mothers seek to clothe their smallest children as they imagine the Pheriannath dress when they are in their own land.

Very nice. I like that idea, and very good for Andred and Gilriel as well!

I hope that the hearing will be of more success than the one of Norien. That man is really a criminal.

P.S.: My birthday is in April, too. So thank you very much for this chapter.

Walker-skyeReviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/7/2017
I have stayed up way too late, enthralled by your story, and then touched by your notes. I'm a chaplain at an addictions treatment center, so the less than savory chracters in your tale ring, sadly, true. But so do those of honor! And justice was served! Your description of the cases before Aragorn held all the drama of a good courtroom show. A thoroughly enjoyable tale, that I hope leaves me with good dreams as I very belatedly head to bed! Thank you!

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